Rhys_k

juvenile and character development all over the shop. did laugh a few times but so many cringe, idiotic and just volgar moments for the sake of being vulgar.

enjoying the characters and story, but please stop repeating yourself. Reading the same thoughts are frustrating as hell.

thank you again. looking forward to more chapters.

mate I am loving this book. If you ever get published I will be buying a copy. Please don't drag out his internal conflict about consummating his marriage. keep up the good work.

I am loving you book. family first mate. look forward to reading more when you are able.

the writing style is like listening to a poem. lovely to listen too for a little bit but confusing and boring when trying to enjoy a developing story.

well written with few errors. very enjoyable story so far.

ooh nice intro. have brought my hopes up.

this story grabbed me and kept me entertained from the first chapter. if the author gets published I will be buying their novels.