mud104

Well this is cricket but I think he should have won, that would have meant more, with the way this tournament has gone.

Read original novel by Robst on fanfiction, this is a copy, https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5627314/1/In-this-World-and-the-Next. Such blatant plagiarism.

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Okay, I know your plan was to drop him from the World Cup team, but this chapter makes zero sense. If you’re gonna give him stats like this, then he needs to be in the team or change the stats so that it makes sense that he was dropped because with these stats, no person with brains will drop him and the reasoning of not being able to control your bowling speed is just complete bullshit given his wickets and economy, hell he could have been selected just based on his batting stats.

At this point just call her your original character, can be like one of your earlier ideas of Dhoni and Sakshi

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