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Noxius_05281mthReplied to Noxius_0528Ch 182 The night with sect Master's concubine.- Noxius_05281mthCommentedCh 182 The night with sect Master's concubine.
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i would say that the story was great up until ch 212 where it seemed as if the author decided to totally scrap the story. Rest of the chapters of vol. 1 are nothing more but a summary of events with 0 story progression totally ignoring everything that was previously created all the mystery intrigue and everything was gone and instead there was just summary of events that had almost 0 connection to the way how the story was progressing previously, most of the items such as necronomicon the qi book and Mayan stones were forgotten and even Sophia was not mentioned anymore only Rachael. there was 0 dialogue and it literally felt as if it was just a summary of the vents instead of actual story. The vol.2 is basically totally different story that has nothing to do with the name of the book and it seems to be about Martin and no longer follows the same protagonist. Now I feel totally cheated as i have purchased all the chapters only to realize that author basically scrapped the original premise halfway through. I am still giving 3 stars since the first half was really good and I might someday read the second volume as it will most likely be an interesting read but I still feel extremely cheated since what is written after ch 212 is basically totally different from the original (either just a summary of events with 0 dialogue in last couple of chapters of vol. 1 or completely new story with different protagonist from vol. 2 onwards)
- Noxius_05282mthCommentedCh 170 The Quest-10!
- Noxius_05282mthCommentedCh 163 The Quest -3!
- Noxius_05289mthReplied to Agent_047
then you are missing a 1 in the last paragraph as it mentioned only 8billion
After laughing for a short period of time , he asked"Why are we only utilizing 15 billion for the preparations regarding the Morgans' movements?" seeking clarification. - Noxius_052811mthReplied to SleepySmile
it's in authors bio
You can see the artwork for this picture and A LOT more on my official server! Remember to join our group! - Noxius_05281yrReplied to SAINT_of_ORIGIN
I personally like Villain: The play of destiny. It has good story where the villain does not focus on all the girls but mostly only on Main and Secondary heroines of protagonists +it has really good story progression where the villain does not immediately clash with the protagonist but spends time to prepare all the traps for the protagonist and starts with taking his chances even before he awakens his golden finger/his story starts officially
Nathan here is making plans about taking his mother on a date while Alex plans on taking her to bed. That's the difference between the protagonist and the villain. - Noxius_05281yrCommented
why do I have this feeling that in Vincent's case it would be the young masters girl that would end up that way
Sadly, the restaurant would end up asking them to leave. Because the rich have priority in these places. He even heard stories about where their girlfriend would stay with the young master. The following day she would return home filled with kiss marks and broken shoes, yet claim nothing happened. - Noxius_05281yrCommented
kinda reminds me of cultivation chat group.
These two cruel blokes always did whatever they wanted, genociding people and tormenting the weak, without a care for consequences or others feelings. It was good for them to suffer a setback every now and then otherwise they might just come out of the pages and start bullying the author! (Editor's Note; Would anyone mind if they bound him to his chair to write from morning to evening, though?)