I loved the book but wish the author would have given the MC more of a private life.

Another woman?

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Is confusing

Please stop using double negatives.

Does this have anything to do with the upgrading of the store? Same approximate time frame to the next upgrade.

I hope he washed off the pee so he did not smell.

I would like more information concerning his private life, parents, sister and empl oyees. How are they reacting?

I though he didn have the money to pay for the black metal to cover his sword, yet his sword is now black.

Mating Season. Is Not when anyone/anything gives birth it us when they Mate and is very dangerous! Birthing is later after the baby is ready to be born. Gripes me that a good story uses such a WRONG word.

Why hasn’t he thought about his family that he has left behind? Worried his mother might be grieving? Seems selfish!

Am finished with this. Looking for another one like The pet store ones.

Too much silly stuff and not enough plot and action

Wolves are not like dogs that mate with any and all available.

Wolves mate for life with only 1 mate.

Too many words describing updating etc.

Tired of MC being his own victim. If he does’nt get stronger, I’ll stop reading.

The caustic humor gets on my nerves. Too childish at times.

I am getting bored with the horse play.

Sorry for your loss. Try not to dwell on your loss but on the time you had together. Your memories help to heal.