Very good story overall. The character progression of Namaru seems kind of rushed but yet fun and unique. I don't think that you got Sauske nor Sarada's personalities accurately. Sauske acts more "upbeat" you could say, and Sarada is kind of lacking the flair you would see her with. Might just be me though. The first chapter felt kind of rushed but I can understand that. So far this seems like it has some pretty good potential so far. Keep it up!

I mean he does list "Overpowered" in his tags, so I mean... I can't help but agree with you though that the first chapter feels kind of rushed. Just wait and for what's in-store next though 😉

fast paced and fun. also chino is an absolute chad. glad i helped create the guy. also hope that this review brings more people to this story.