No sweat! Don't feel bothered at all. We all are here to help each other after all.

Sorry for late reply, I was on a break from this app...lol Anyways, you can use girl/gal/any other casual words older males use to address younger females. Actually, simply girl/little girl will not be bad too.

Guards are not so sophisticated. They dont use these words, let the true nobles use those words not the guards to show the difference.

I get the meaning now. It's beautiful, but it is sounds like a slang in English.

Tried many softwares to manage the novel and may have finally got it. Expect a single chapter this week as I will be making a complete timeline with calendar and all the stuff. Why didn't I do this before? Well, I didn't know these even exited until 2 days ago and was planning novel on onenotes, which was tiring. And also, after completing the prologue volume I got many new inputs which made me design a proper broad system of novel before going any further. It is a mostly a one time event and after establishing everything it will go exceptionally smooth. I mean, I didn't even name the main villain of this volume while designing the prologue volume....I even have a map of Dao Realm, even if it is made by scribbling on MS paint...hahaha.

I am trying World Anvil, Campfire Blaze, Bibisco, and a plug in for Microsoft World. I may move 100% to bibisco as its supporter's edition fulfill what I needs the most. But honestly, if you have more money to spend on it there are a lot better alternatives like Scrivener.

A solid 5 star novel if grammar was even a bit better. While drama, characters, and setting are great I really wish to see this novel properly edited so that many could enjoy more from this unique novel. Without disclosing anything worth considering as a spoiler I can say that this novel is based on dramatic elements borrowed from mainstream dramas, mainly Korean fantasy Dramas, which only a few novels uses on this platform. I will revisit again after some time to see whether English has gotten slightly better to give a complete 5 star this story deserves, for now I can only give 4.8 Stars.

Quite fast to disown her...lol fast boi.

Plot armor activated successfully.

Poor bro.

Woosh. That escalated quite fast.

Moonbich hotel....

Phones are working??

Why are they calling her Miss? Why so much respect?

I can try to create chapters ranging from 2500-3500. The first volume is a complete prologue volume with big info dumps, sorry that it disturbed you, but since I didn't make a protagonist who starts from beginning, I was kind of forced to create a big prologue and synopsis. It is also difficult for me to edit large chapters. But nevertheless, I am not writing to bore anyone, all the chapters will definitely move the narrative forward in some direction, so, if you see a long one you can expect that story is moving a little bit faster. This is similar to Korean and Japanese novels which produce long chapters, and I am indeed adopting their model here. But even then, let me write a month or two and establish pace for this volume. I will review the chapter updates and word/chapter at that time.

Thanks for the review!

Yes, it is on a long side. But since most books here are short ones based on daily release, I will release this one with long chapters but weekly 2-3 releases to cater to the readers who want a book they could read on weekly basis while not impacting the books they support daily. I don't have monetization strategy and is really doing this in exchange of playing some Moba games in my free time to be honest. If I get to complete the book while not getting a contract, I will then publish a remastered version of Book on Amazon and others. Meaning that I will not publish daily and you can pick this book once a week, if that's fine by you, and read 7000+ words in one go. Please also look at the pinned author's review. It is not a shameless review but a thread where I post small updates and will even chat with readers.

Thanks for the review. I am forming a proper timeline, calendar, narrative, and many other things now to keep on creating impactful story. Please keep supporting like this!

Thanks a lot! I am using a writing software to create a better narrative, expect even better execution of story from now. Thanks for support, without readers like you I would not have gotten this much serious.

A generic line which still works. Cool!