Interesting plot. I like that it's unique. And that poem-type thing you wrote is very original. Overall, ur story is very gripping and I will keep on reading it

Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles, can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer!!!

Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer