Historically, the Heian period Japan allowed men to have multiple wives as there was no real official marriage celebration during this time (aside from the emperor of course). I can make this story have a harem tag because of the period but there is a conflicting idea that we need to look at first: the knight is a devout catholic christian and in his religion having multiple wives is a strict no-no.I'm still trying to circumvent this paradox because I want him to have multiple love interests but that established idea has been hindering me from putting out a final approach.

yes I have, but I rarely use Discord nowadays.

The overall story is good. The quality of your writing is getting better with each passing chapter (I only read until chapter 5 for now because of work). This novel reminds me of a Japanese manga I read months ago which has the exact plot.

You could use "somehow" instead of "seemingly" to make the sentence sound natural.

This chapter has better quality when it comes to progression. You did improve. I enjoyed reading his playful manner towards Anthea.

Nice usage of words, I liked it.

Let me be frank with you, the dialogue within this chapter feels unnatural. I feel that MC's reaction was forced.

You know, you can connect this paragraph to the previous dialogue.

Oh God the title made me laugh so hard. Instant five stars because the content is perfect and the story is better than some of the isekai I had read. Please do not drop this!

I revamped the first chapter based on your suggestion. The next chapters will follow soon.

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Please read Chapter One again. I overhauled most of the content there. The main character turned into a comical character.

You're right. I realized that I have to change the way I write. Allow me to rewrite my chapters then. Updates will be added soon.

everything happens so fast.

noah acts like a stalker lol

The first Chapter is good and it made me hooked up. A must-read for those who are looking for a character they can relate to.

I liked your wording here. It opens a solemn feeling toward the reader.

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I am happy that you liked it.Hmm. I haven't watched that show yet. I was inspired by Inuyasha and Rurouni Kenshin when I wrote this story.

I gradually decreased the use of poetic words in the succeeding chapters, replacing them with explanations in detail. Thanks for the tips.

Thanks for reading and your opinion is valuable to me.I plan to release chapters every day. That is why the progression is a slow burn.