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Maybe author made MC overpowered too early. He didn't know how to continuing it
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Author's stories are like that. MC has to suffering from lost, or even worst. Sometimes it means nothing for the plot, and didn't give any development
You know, this chapter would be perfect if you didn't make unnacessary "hero saving beauties" scene.
I hope you keep the old one version. Because it's also good
Understood. Hope you get well soon
A lot of potential, and good start. But author make women around MC getting hurts again and again. I think something wrong with author's head
And here we go again
damn, i think we read too much fanfics. we know the reference easily
Kakashi: That's my student