Destined_death

Good story with a cool MC. The writing is pretty good. Maybe you can make an auxiliary chapter to explain the power system and their level

But then his blessend land will be inferior

If ascend throught the fire path in the end he will have far less potent and with less “potential” than fang yuan and the girl with the dream physique ( i don’t remember the name)

A promising story. While I think narrating in the third person might be better, the first person works well too. Do you already have an idea of the path he’s going to follow as an immortal, or if he’s going to create a new one?

Author, I was thinking that since the MC starts out cultivating Blood Path, after he becomes an Immortal you could have him begin developing Killing Path, similar to Spectral Soul. I think the two paths would work really well together. At the same time, you could also have him continue pursuing Human Path, as you originally planned.

Pretty Good story with an original gu path. The only flaw is that the story is too fast pace, in only 60 chapters the Mc is already a rank 3 Gu master. There’re too little “adventures” the story is only about going from one rank to Another.

So he can only kill enemies that are at most one rank weaker than him. For example, as a Saint he can kill beings at the Fallen or Master rank, but not those at the Awakened rank. Am I right?

Fantastic story, I can’t find nothing wrong. The writing and the characters personality are vero well Made. Gives real dark romance vibes

Why in the character add personality they said Elysia is dead? It’s true?

How big is the harem?