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his obsession with pork....
LOL sounds like a physical fitness test
The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!
reminds me of people queuing for iPhones..
this is nicely written!
Rozenheart is a nice name
I started reading thinking it would be the usual romance story but hey, it was way better than what I had expected. the ML and FL didn’t felt cliche to me, i’m attracted to find out more about their pasts and secrets. I enjoyed the writing style and descriptions too (some of them are very cute, especially how the two of them met as kids). I’m anticipating there might be some heartbreaking moments or twists as the story progresses? Not sure what the writer has planned for us yet but I believe it will be something great :)
aye, seems like he really likes her. why offer a contractual marriage..
this was quite unexpected
some of the descriptions used were really nice, and i like the writing style too.
nice!
i like this metaphor too!
whoa, i'm thinking that Gabriel hid something from her in the past? okay need to read on to find out..
The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!