The_Crimson_Writer

If your doing a DC universe, might as well add Shazam. He’s often a core member of DC, plus one of the few to have a good movie.

I wont lie, I do prefer this one over your other 100 fic. I like the supernatural elements more. (I’ve only gotten to chapter 9) Normally I don’t like harem fics, but if done properly and within reason they can definitely work and be a joy to read. So thanks for the chapter.

If Daniel is going into game creation, why not make the DC games The Batman Arkham verse and Injustice.

I’m going to assume that soon Felix will be going to another world/ universe. So on that topic I’d recommend the One Piece universe. For two reasons: - Their use of Haki is superior to The Cardinal Worlds useage. Armament will increase MC physical abilities and Observation will increase his sensing range and give him the ability to see into the future. - Lastly and most interesting is the wide and infinite range of Devils Fruit Odin I mean Felix could copy and mimic. Or potentially he could just create his own and hand them out to his subjects.

Haven’t read the other chapters yet, but the mc should become Red Hood and hunt down supernatural’s gain a good amount of infamy that way.

Best be Jensen, before he appeared in the boys the world was sleeping on his acting abilities. He would be great at both Bruce Wayne and Batman.

Just an idea, but Daniel should do interviews as George but in disguise like with fake hair and a fat suit. Then eventually in a few years during an interview he should just start taking it off. It would be pretty jokes to prank the entire world like that.

Why not just do a Shallot si but in universe 7, you could literally plop him in at any point of the story then.

Great Chapter and story so far, looking forward to more.

Personally I’d prefer it if Enid and Luke to have be platonic friends, you know BFF’s. One doesn’t often see a Male & Female friendship without some sort of S*xual development.