Sangat cepat dan super luar biasa, hingga terasa seperti omong kosong.

Plot nya, ya, semau mu, serba cepat. Pemenuhan keinginan penulis. Tidak berbobot. Plot buruk

Plot aneh, time skip membuat alur kacau. Ini seperti mengulang cerita ke nol.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Has a tendency to be boring

Cut off at the hot part, huuu

Saeko's rhythm is quite fast but it's good, The remaining 2 women will speed up the progress of the harem. Awesome, this is both logical and interesting

Each heroin has a character that feels extraordinary. Cool

Teruskan nice nyan

Menarik overall ferfect

It's a bit disappointing, criminals, traitors should be punished accordingly.

This is fine, as long as the bad guy dies. Mc villain is the best.[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins]

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Jujur sulit untuk bertahan di bab bab awal, ini bukan attack on Titan yang saya tahu, plot kacau tanpa penjelasan. Akan bagus jika plot awal mirip dengan anime, lalu mulai ada perbedaan seiring adanya keputusan yang di ambil mc dalam cerita. Kecewa[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Aneh,

Membingungkan, aneh

Sangat aneh, kurang penjelasan, terlalu terburu-buru. Kecewa