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FanFicReader_10119hReplied to TheUltimateP1eThe author could say Dante was dying his hair black or something so if stops dying it should turn back to white or something hopefully can’t be Dante without the the white hair lol
Okay, maybe emo-Dante wasn't so bad after all.- FanFicReader_1011dReplied to Last_count
Also in this chapter he let all these people die for no reason even tho he has the power to stop it from happing and still stayed hidden
The explosions cause a lot of destruction and injure many people. Indra manages to dodge, but many of the hunters and soldiers get hit by the explosions. The Hunters have some resistance to magic attacks, so they don't die, but many of the soldiers are normal people and they die instantly. - FanFicReader_1011dReplied to
I’m sorry it very hard to put into words but I’m just not feeling the character I also don’t like his mentality I mean every single chapter his always questioning his own strength and his actions
The explosions cause a lot of destruction and injure many people. Indra manages to dodge, but many of the hunters and soldiers get hit by the explosions. The Hunters have some resistance to magic attacks, so they don't die, but many of the soldiers are normal people and they die instantly. - FanFicReader_1012dCommented
Bit of an exaggeration but ok
Some fans even tried to climb over the barrier, wanting to rush onto the field to celebrate with Lin Quan. - FanFicReader_1012dCommented
Bicycle kicks are something you do in the air not the ground just for future reference
Though his dribbles looked plain, without any flashy moves such as bicycle kicks, stepovers, or feints, he left them behind. - FanFicReader_1012dCommented
Please don’t make him a mage make him a battle mage or something like Jin-woo
"Perhaps the Gates of Babylon but who would I get the other weapons… I'm an Idiot I literally have the power of creation that's bound by only my imagination. But the question is what to create first…" - FanFicReader_1013dCommented
Just why like seriously
[Shape Shifting: Changing your physical appearance from face, body shape, skin color, etc. As your skill level increases, you can even transform into different life forms. Mana cost: 1000 MP per hour.] - FanFicReader_1013dCommented
Make it so he use like Locke black clover or like A from Naruto where he uses it increase his strength speed and defense
"Huh? Lightning magic? I don't remember Jin Woo and Odin mentioning this. Also, they give me Lightning Magic itself, not Spells like the other skills. Do they want me to explore this magic and create spells myself?" - FanFicReader_1013dCommented
I really not liking the mc
The explosions cause a lot of destruction and injure many people. Indra manages to dodge, but many of the hunters and soldiers get hit by the explosions. The Hunters have some resistance to magic attacks, so they don't die, but many of the soldiers are normal people and they die instantly. - FanFicReader_1013dCommentedCh 16 16. Humans are Monster Too
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She already know the truth he literally showed her
Hades nodded, a flicker of worry crossing his features. "We need to be careful. If Bella discovers the truth about us, it could put her in danger." - FanFicReader_1015dCommented
I’m a bit confused you say his doing it for the team and everything but his really only doing it for himself right so he gets more points and stuff because when he has his inner thoughts he sounds pretty selfish which I like btw selfish mc=best mc
Ch 30 Chapter 30: I'll Guard the Team's Rear - FanFicReader_10111dCommented
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Why do that if his gonna be like Peter Parker smart he should be able to devolve something from his blood to help slow down his loved ones ageing process otherwise how he gonna live long enough to fight the council of kangs and other big threats of marvel
"Hmm, I see. Though I admit that at having those abilities in particular would aid me..., however it would also make it to where life wouldn't be a real challenge. With an immortal body I would be forced to watch as my loved one slowly wither away. And the only benefit I could see towards having a sharingan is having the ability to predict and steal techniques..., having the rest wouldn't give me a challenge." - FanFicReader_10112dCommentedCh 1 I'M NOT THE BRUCE BANNER
- FanFicReader_10117dReplied to shashank_bhatt
Are you ever going to continue your marvel grant ward fic I really enjoyed
He was almost like a black-and-blue blur as he covered the 100-meter distance in under 5 seconds. Making everyone gobsmacked even Bakugo who pushed his best to beat Yuta but there was no way. - FanFicReader_10117dCommented
You could add quicker zombies or something like the less decomposed they the quicker they can be
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