I honestly don’t have any criticism for you. If anything I really enjoy the novel, one thing I rlly enjoy is your dialogue between the characters, it is extremely fluid and life like which gives so much depth to the characters and ongoing story. So I really enjoy that aspect. Thank you!

Romance will be in the story! However it will be slowly developed overtime.

Hello Readers! I hope you all enjoy this book! This is my first novel so I am excited about delving into this world. Please comment and review to help encourage me and also give me critiques! I would love feedback, from you the reader. Thank you!

[A/N : When writing the food section, I might have been a little hungry. The upcoming chapters should begin to stir up some interesting conflict. Thank you all for reading! :) ]

Hello! Shameless author review here! I am excited to share this story with all of you and I hope you enjoy where I take the story as much as I do! This is my first even novel so I will try my best to improve in writing and developing my craft as an author! I would love feedback in areas, you the readers notice! You enjoy system novels? ✅ You enjoy Vast World Building where MC helps in development? ✅ No Harem? ✅ Thank you all! Please enjoy! :)

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Overall the book is FANTASTIC! The character development is very good, it’s a subtle progression throughout the whole book which is nice. Also the power system is well thought out and the main character while OP actually has to take time to reach new levels which Is refreshing. You definitely should give it a read!

Love the quote from Batman!

Overall the story and world building is fantastic! To all new readers, the character development is very well thought out and same with certain things with the plot. The author also writes a lot of fun culture references in almost every chapter and it’s fun to know where they come from! My only critique to this novel is simply how it only gets 1 chapter a week. With how the author writes the story (which I love), the book will never finish with the release of chapters. This would be my only complaint. Overall for where the book is at, it is an amazing story!

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FIRST COMMENT! LETS GO! WE LOVE THE BABY! 😤

WOOT WOOT! BABY KREMETH! LETS GOOOO

THANK YOU FOR THE CHAPTER! AND FURBALL THE GOAT!

YESSSSS! WERE SO CLOSE! CLIMAX BUILDI NG😤

WOOT WOOT NEW CHAPTER

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

HAHAHA YES! I’ve missed this! Oh the nostlgia from Omega 😌