Expert imagery and descriptions with a pretty good plot to boot. They're very well detailed and work great. We already have multiple questions brought to the table early on to keep things going the rest of the way. Only downside is the amount of grammatical errors there is sometimes. It's not anything too distracting, but I found it irking me a little. Props to the author and I hope you continue improving.

Alright, so this is a review for the first 23 chapters. Pros: - Good dialogue - solid story and story development - good word usage - fun to read Cons: - blocky text, I wish the author split up the big paragraphs into smaller ones. - bunches of grammatical errors, luckily they're small ones but still very noticeable. I hope the author continues improving on his writing!

Honestly, it's decent in my eyes. GOH fans would probably enjoy it more since it's a fan fic and can understand what's going on much better. With some googling and wiki searching I managed to get some clue ins on the world here and there. The plot so far seems alright, but again GOH fans would probably enjoy it more than I have. Other than that, I hope the author improves upon their grammar and punctuation (there was also the rare spelling error) as it's a weak point. Good job author. 👍

While, I'm not into stories about the rich elites of society (no matter the age), romance, or princes and princesses, this one's honestly pretty good. The flow of the words is very interesting. The plot is pretty well put together and I think I have an idea of how it's going to end.

Such a great story! I'm incredibly impressed and that's coming from someone who doesn't even like romance novels! Major props give to the author for this one.

Yeah, I've been trying my best with my grammar but I'm not the best with it. They also didn't call the police because they didn't have any phones nearby, my apologies for not clarifying that error in continuity!

Pretty good for a darker tone story so far (currently 10 chapters). The descriptions and imagery sometimes irk me, but not totally annoying to me. It's a very different take on the isekai genre and I like it. I hope the author keeps going with his work! ^^

This is a review for the first 10 chapters: keep in this mind. Overall, I don't have many complaints rather than some descriptions here and there could use some work. Pretty great for an reincarnation novel.

Keep in mind that this is a review for the first 15 chapters: A very good read! Props to the author! Very engaging with very good characters and plot to boot. I'm excited to see where things go!

This a review for the first 14 chapters. Overall, the story is very good and set ups for a very good and very detailed atmosphere, often stopping to smell the roses with a calming smell. Though, I am not a fan of animal-based storytelling. That took away some enjoyment for me personally but that's not a detriment to the story in anyway as it still manages to be very high quality. Serious props to the author!

This is a review of the first 15 chapters. I can't complain about a single thing this web novel has offered so far. While the start is slow, it works very well. The ideas presented have worked very well and everything feels very detailed and realistic while still maintaining its touch with a world of fantasy. I'll have to continue reading this at a later date because I'm enthralled with what's being presented. My only complaint is that descriptions could be more concise, but this issue would most likely be fixed in the hands of a physical copy. Cheers to the authors! ^^

I don't know about this series entirely. It's not bad but I can't connect to the series entirely because I'm not a fan of romance. I do like the twist at the start and the couple so far, though. Though I will say, that fans of romance will most likely enjoy this series.

Certainly an interesting war story, set in a modern day world but with me twists to keep things fresh and unique. The characters are great, the drama is great, and the mystery and the conflict make me want to keep going. Props to the author.

This is a review of the first 5 chapters of this to be long-running series. I don't have many complaints. The characters are great, there are plenty of questions left unanswered that will be answered eventually in time. It gives me a sense of odd unfamiliarity with the world that makes me want to continue reading on with it.

The I at the end there shouldn't be there.

This review accounts for the first 3 chapters and is more or less first impressions as the prologue as only been finished. The writing style is creative and unique, far from what I've been used to seeing and reading. The characters are interesting so far. I look forward to the beginning.

This book has potential and it's shown some but it for sure has plenty of room to grow in just about every aspect. The grammar and writing are iffy (why I suggest that the author should use Grammarly to check it). The characters I do have a soft spot for, but they don't lack either strengths or flaws to make them the most enjoyable. I sure hope the author improves and continues this. It's interestingly structured and I like that.

Shameless 5 star review from the author I know... Let me use this as a chance to give some progress updates and how I've felt on my work on this so far: It hasn't been a total nightmare surprisingly. I'm planning to give Luca and Rambone new looks soon in this current part/arc of the story and use it as a grounds for training and as a way to introduce my magic system which has gone through a lot of revisioning (a good amount since I started this series) and I think that you guys will really like it! My plan for the story is just about complete and currently its just about putting what's on my head and my manuscripts onto paper for you all to read! My gripe in this so far is that I'm not the biggest fan of my characters so far and my release schedule can feel inconsistent at times thanks to some lack of motivation or energy. The support I've gotten from all of you guys is a major motivator for me to keep going. I love you guys.

I'm working on my grammar! I apologize!

yep my apologies, it's now fixed!