GERSON

I beg you not to do it. This novel has great potential, and I fear you might turn it into just another harem fanfiction, which would lead me to abandon it, as I am tired of that kind of story.

For the emperor!!!!

This fanfic reminds me a lot of Warhammer 40k, especially the time when the Emperor was in the Terra Unification War. Alchemy-enhanced soldiers remind me of Thunder Warriors. Damian appears to be the Emperor, leading his human and non-human forces in their attempt to eliminate his enemies. I hope the empire Damian tries to form is better than the Empire of Man in Warhammer 40k. PS: sorry, I don't speak English. :)

NO

TERMINATOR

FOR THE EMPEROR!!!!!

a tau pulse rifle from warhammer 40k

FOR THE GOD EMPEROR!!!!

FOR THE GOD EMPEROR!! FOR THE MANKIND!!!

Dude, I honestly love your story. I am very supportive of HFY and would love to see humanity becoming the humanity of the dark age of technology from Warhammer 40k or The Culture. Tuf Voyaging, Transcendence, Star Trek, and Dune are examples of humanities I want to see become the greatest race in the universe.