Cringe

There's no need to even think about it, he's not funny anymore.

It would be nice if you took away this crazy Chinese humor, and wrote it in a human way

In fact, with each new chapter, this story becomes more boring and frivolous. As if the further, the more this story becomes like a typical wish fulfillment. Heroes become hostages of their images, no different from caricature types. And I do not know if this is the only thing I have, but the writing style becomes similar to the correspondence of two friends. Slang expressions are used that completely destroy the whole atmosphere. I am very disappointed with how a good story slides into a pit called "Typical Dumb Stories on Webnovel"

Cringe

Obito is real vamp 💀

Ok, it's time to drop

Wow, someone is using CRA again. Smart move to let me drop fanfiction.

I left a review after reading the last chapter of this novel. Lewd apocalypse read in full.

Basically it's cringe. The last novel was much better both in terms of plot and in terms of 18+. The description of sex is much poorer and less interesting than in the previous work.

A shitty novel. The writing style is so terrible that you just don't understand what's going on. Actions rush from one to another, there is no sequence, descriptions of actions are stupidly skipped, as if we ourselves have to figure out what the author meant. Humor - cringe, typical Japanese shit.

It's totally cringe. Each chapter just makes you cringe, despite the fact that the author tries to explain everything with humor, he does not succeed.

Reading this story, I realized that it reminded me of an interesting point. I remembered that Simpsons episode where Flanders had a new house built, the corridors of which were constantly narrowing. It was a really funny moment

This version of the novel is much worse than the last one. It is very boring to read these useless chapters, where he will be embarrassed, and where every woman will know about his plans, because she "noticed it by the way his 3 and 245 hairs on his head are located when he poops in the toilet." And the sex scenes are incredibly tedious, just generally about nothing.

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