THIS BOOK COMPLETED with a sequel part 2: Genuine, sincere love makes the couple stay together in the love story of Angeline and Jacob, where the powerful witch Carina was defeated with just a magical kiss. Claimed by the Vampire Prince (Protector 2) is a story of Angeline's fraternal twin Ethan with the outcast fairy.

I am requesting your comment to delete as this is not constructive criticism. Not a good critic at all. Do you have a degree in Psychology? I wonder. Did you have a chance to read the original format of Stephen King or James Patterson's book? You would be shocked, but their books sold tons of copies, thanks to their editor! And did you have books published in paperbacks and sold worldwide? I bet not. No one's a perfect writer regarding grammar, and the plotlines matter and how it touches a reader's heart and become your fan. I've written hundreds of books and sold worldwide in my country, yet I don't pull down a newbie since it is their trying moment to be discovered, not by your standard, that is, if you have. And with my first book here, I'm earning already. I like to write here because of the freestyle.

Lance actually good name for his character which means: the Spear of Destiny

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Wow!

Good described narration

The story is no different from a ship going against stormy weather, but the creator made it through, and the most important thing about the writing is the perseverance to keep going...

Your title: There's no word such as treanding, maybe trending?

In the book, you don't need to mention this.. :)

Send me the your book link here :)

Read some more books with the same genre for input and guidance

Yeah, try making an embarrassing or funny meeting interaction; a heated meeting argument, for example, gets the crush's intention, you know... just like in real life. No interaction means no exciting event.

Likewise. Have a great day ahead :)

Read the same genre books so you can learn from them. Do you have a favorite author? I can email you your fave books to get more input. Also, learn how is it with palmistry as it would be great to add in your input :)

You're welcome. Have a great day ahead!

The Future, the present, and the past, in reality, are right there written in your palm. And lucky for those old souls who can trigger what they are in the past.

Avoid doing this.

Another plot line of soul-searching.

A story of the soul transmigration to a new younger version of Rihan, who seems to be yearning for a perfect world, an example of a good hero in the world created from the created mind of the writer. Give it a try, guys!

This is my second book—a contemporary plot line that is a romantic suspense for you, guys. I hope you'll enjoy the life of the protagonist from a secret arrangement marriage by her father to her childhood friend, betrayal, and fighting for her rights :)