Lol this is not his real body

Now where have I said anything comparable to a slur don’t make up none sense.

By that concept primordial human sounds better

People hate people for less

Also being immortal is just not being able to die which does not indicate the power level of someone. So maybe you have a misconception on what an immortal is because it isn’t like ban from seven deadly sins.

I love one punch man but it is a comedic anime and the punch line is that he can one shot anyone. And this isn’t a comedic story and certainly can’t be compared to OPM so it has to actually have longevity and world building. There are way too many stories with OP MC’s now. So even though this novel isn’t great you can’t try to put it side to side with a great anime like one punch man.

I also like how I’m instantly a bigot. When I have no problem with your beliefs I find religion a beacon of morality in fact. And is definitely needed. but rating a novel 1 star for a name is excessive. Just my opinion which is unimportant.

Hmm how so? I never said any hateful words just advice. Don’t go searching for holiness in a bar ment for fun.

Then I recommend the most popular book in the world to you. It’s called the Bible if you don’t want your beliefs to get in the way of your reading experience read that instead or the Quran, Buddhism etc. Just don’t go crying when you see something unholy in some novel.

Make a wish kid right here

Beast in bed and in the fields

I had an annurism reading this what are you even saying

Ok that makes more sense. As starting the story with him just being bad and no background on how he got picked confused me. So thanks for clearing that up.

How did he get picked for the position if he’s this bad. Did they not have enough money or did he look like he had potential. Because right now I do not understand how a goalkeeper with no goal keeping skills. Is on the starting line up playing as a professional goalkeeper. Even if he is bad atleast give Him a foundation to build on because as of now I just think FC picked some rando off the streets. Who happened to receive a system not very realistic to me.

Your weird Y would he need to harm his own brother. Family is really important you know.

Well you can start off good then become crazy no contridictions rly.

Either way we’ve both got a life I’d rather not constantly argue over ideals. This is essentially just conflicting opinions. I’ll rather just agree to disagree. So take care and stay safe.

Idk if your suggesting I’m creepy but I’m just stating reality. As for the slice of life part you clearly have reservations for this kind of behavior which is totally fine. But rather than suffering I suggested moving onto another series. With a saint like mc who suites your taste.

I mean this sort of righteous attitude is not something convenient in this situation. Why expect the mc to be a savior you can go to a slice of life for that. I‘m not sure this fan fic is your cup of tea maybe move on and find something more suitable.

So save the girl and take her in? by that logic he has gotta do that for every kid in the slums. Even if he saves her she will meet this situation again. I’ m not sure what your expecting.