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Minty_Squid

Minty_Squid

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2021-11-28 JoinedUnited States
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
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    Shameless review here. Wanted to ask anyone with opinions on my first few chapters to please share them. While I have a generalized plan for the novel, I have many places I can make improvements and am open to advice. Thank you for reading!

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    Vampire Blood-Mage
    Fantasy · Minty_Squid
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to Syclus

    no it's 10

    Some others followed him, and, in a few seconds, there were only about seven more people left within the circle, Gustav included, making it extra spacious.
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to Kaifchocho

    maybe after a millennia we too, can find someone

    Ch 1913 An Undead heart
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    bro

    Ch 1822 Not my Problem
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Meanwhile she just sneak attacked them mid fight

    "Both the Red vampire leaders teamed up against me. I thought you pathetic vampires would have more pride than this. Do you see me bringing my teammates?" Erin asked.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    What happened to the ogre mask

    "Well, seeing as all of you should now be aware of who I am, I hope that you don't decide to do anything stupid, and will help me without having to be forced." Quinn addressed the vampires before him. Without Peter, there was no way for him to use the same disguise as he had before.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to Neptunez_

    Agreed..

    'I'm sorry to say this, Quinn, but what the f*ck are you doing?! So many people have died in this war. What was the point of you getting this crystal if you were just going to be out of the whole war?' Sam inwardly said to himself, nearly pulling out his hair. It was the first time he had criticised Quinn like this, even if it was in his head.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Aww

    'The Blue Fang armour set has been one of the best armour sets I've ever used. On top of that, it was gifted to me by her. It would only be right to upgrade the armour set to help me out in this war against the Dalki.'
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Cursed has only won 3 times though, they never fought Cursed A versus Daisy A

    "You guys don't have to do this," Quinn said. "If you give up the fight, then it will be four wins each and our group will go up against them."
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to PopcornSectJunior

    Actually I’m pretty sure that it was said normal food tasted horrible to them

    Not a word had been spoken between the four of them, from when the food had arrived to when they had finished eating. Finally, Fex couldn't take it anymore. He had to make some type of conversation, anything.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to EchoNinja

    so that's what he needed to attain godhood? 😅

    The next few days, Link accompanied Herrera and traveled through the forest. They recounted their past in the forest and would use magic to build a house at night. They would either rest or make love in the house. There were no restrictions.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    lol

    His laugh was a bit hysterical. After finally controlling himself, he patted Link's shoulder firmly. "Alright, son, let's go. Let's show those old guys who look down on me. The Morgensterns are either failures or heroes!"
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    But he supposedly Isn’ affected by cold

    The Archmage opened the box with another wave of his hand. A colorless crystal as big as a pigeon's egg floated out of the box. As soon as it came into contact with the air in the outside world, it was immediately surrounded by a milky white mist. The temperature in the hall instantly dropped to negative 30 degrees. Link could not help but shiver in the sudden cold.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Pretty sure the ruler of light and darkness rules darkness

    Darkness Does Not Rule, I Rule Darkness
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    he funded but Lucy built it

    Link did not bother fathoming what these people were thinking. He continued down the road, admiring the city that he had built from the ground up with his own hands.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Hmmm I thou time slowed down ght

    A day in Firuman was equivalent to a year in Aragu. In other words, the Snow Mountain Archmage would only be able to extend his life for another 100 days even with the aid of a secret spell. If the Archmage were to perish, both Aragu and Firuman would be doomed as well. Link and the others had little time to spare at this point.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Warrior in his youth

    Prince Mordena reacted quite quickly too. He'd been a Magician in his youth and was a wandering vigilante too. He had trained in battle techniques before. Now, he retreated while white transmission light flashed. He wanted to move away from Link.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    He wants them dead so there is less rejection on him

    At that moment, Glyn's voice rang out in their minds. "Go! Make yourselves useful. We need all the support we can get from these people!"
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Replied to Eric_Pahl

    He was abandoned by link basic ally

    It was Dorias. Ferde was no longer a place he could reside in, especially as the city became even more prosperous and its population grew every day. Ordinary folk feared him, so Dorias thought it best to live in Girvent Forest, away from civilization.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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  • Minty_Squid
    Minty_Squid1yr
    Commented

    Wouldn’t that be 124?

    "Oh, I see. It is fortunate that you are back. Oh, the girl blessed by the gods is back. Oh, this is amazing!" Lawndale could feel that the other was at the pinnacle of Level-8 and was only around 24 years old. What did this mean? It meant that she had great potential and could become a Legendary figure.
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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