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Yeah I think this is going a bit overboard.
I think the author should define what type of countermeasures they are using
Question what were all his abilities again? I remember that telepathy and Cyberkinesis were one and the same. Then the seven seconds into the future thing. But what is the third ability?
Or you could just ditch them and be better off but whatever.
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The only problem I have is that the pacing is a little too quick try to put details such as physical movement to improve this