PrimisOptimus

Mt friend, I know English isn't your mother tongue, it isn't even mine. But, a word of advice, use an LLM to atleast correct the grammar. Don't have it write entire chapters, because that can harm the overall writing quality and make all the characters edgy. Just use it to correct some awkward sentences and correct the grammar.

While I do understand where you are comming from, but consider this. Every NPC have a certain level of loyalty to their creator and other members of the Guild. If you watch anime, during the attack of jaldabaoth on Re-Estize, where Gaggaran of Blue Rose attacks Entoma and damages her maid dress, she gets really pissed. So, I don't think that it would make sense that Momonga changed the race which their creator created. It is just my opinion and not really an objective take. Other than than, loving the story, keep up the good work. Also, please correct all the names, you can use the wiki.

I find it odd, that in situations like these, where people are in combat, that they would pronouce a spell like: Fifth Tier XX spell. It would be more realistic if they just uttered the name of the spell, rather than stating the tier of it.

Agreed

If you are going to copy another fanfic, atleast give credit man. I know there are some differences, however, the many parts are the same. Like the flow, story, etc.

It's alright, happens to the best of us. Hope you are doing well.

dully noted, reader-san.

Thanks for the review.

He can, but there are limitations to it. The ability to convert someone into a vampire is due to a skill, which has some restrictions, but he will be able to break them in the future.

my bad bro, but it is an AU.