Lovidar5
My name is Vladimir Gorokhov, I write mainly in the genre of science fiction. If you have any questions, write them to me. Lovidar2@yandex.ru
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I see. It took me a while to realize that your book was written in the style of a novelized video game. We call this genre "lit-rpg", a literary role-playing game. At first I thought it was an effect bestowed on Erik by the Weavers of Fate.
I've read a few chapters. Vikings, Vikings, Vikings... It was as if I found myself in a global modification of the Skyrim video game. Moreover, the book is compiled as a report on the actions in a video game. Since I'm a fan of classical genres, it confuses me a little, but you can get used to it. In general, not bad. The world is strict, epic and gloomy, all the heroes are in their places, the main character Erik has simple and understandable goals, he does not rush to save the world like a comic book hero, but strives to achieve very specific goals. Alas, the motivation of the higher forces that brought the protagonist back to life remains unclear. Perhaps this will be explained in later chapters. The narration is good - the author's language is simple, concise and clear, you will not fall asleep while reading.
here Erik became like a typical MMA fighter :)
Oh, he should have taken a spear and learned to ride :) But a magic boxer is also not bad. A weapon that cannot be lost, cannot be taken away, and that is always with you.
Useful practice. But is the old butler a reliable defender? Even in a well-protected home location.
smart boy)
Wird is something of an experience (EXP) in video games combined with rating points?
Eric is too focused on axes. There are better weapons - for example, a spear - a weapon of victory! Especially for a cavalryman. Or protazan - a spear with a wide blade and a guard. However, this is the author's business.
Judging by your description, Erik's mother was a strong shaman. Therefore, it is logical that the gift was passed on to her son.
Very convenient - a typical medieval fantasy world, and the hero has all the statistics in front of his eyes in the form of a convenient text. Is he a Terminator? :) It seems that the Weavers of Fate have provided Eric with a built-in cyber implant)
And that's right! A true aristocrat is not the one who lives at the expense of his subordinates, but the one who is able to lead them. And in order to become like that, you need to understand the problems and desires of ordinary people. And you can understand them only by participating in their lives personally.
you mean one piece of furniture converted into another? For example, there was a table and they made a small bed out of it?
The exploits will wait- it looks like Eric will have to pee in his panties for several years first and learn to speak :)