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My name is Vladimir Gorokhov, I write mainly in the genre of science fiction. If you have any questions, write them to me. Lovidar2@yandex.ru

2021-11-23 JoinedRussia
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Replied to New_World_3760

    иносказательно можно и так сказать. А так- "Рождение новой зари"- это эпос, записанный выжившими участниками Великой Межзвездной Войны и Исхода.

    Ch 3 1. Рождение новой зари. 3
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    Cosmic Adventurers (Космические Детективы)
    Sci-fi · Lovidar5
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Replied to New_World_3760

    да, некоторым образом)

    Ch 1 1. Рождение новой зари. 1
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    Cosmic Adventurers (Космические Детективы)
    Sci-fi · Lovidar5
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Posted

    Yes, I like this book, otherwise I wouldn't write it :) At the same time, I am aware of her shortcomings and understand that she does not deserve the highest evaluation in everything. And therefore- 4.0. It will be fair. I appreciated myself, now I'm waiting for your feedback :))

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    The Cosmic Adventurers
    Sci-fi · Lovidar5
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Replied to YoanRoturier

    I see. It took me a while to realize that your book was written in the style of a novelized video game. We call this genre "lit-rpg", a literary role-playing game. At first I thought it was an effect bestowed on Erik by the Weavers of Fate.

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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    The combat specialization that the hero has chosen is very similar to the monk from the DnD 3-Icewind Dale 2 or NWN-based games.

    Ch 5 Ch.4
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Posted

    I've read a few chapters. Vikings, Vikings, Vikings... It was as if I found myself in a global modification of the Skyrim video game. Moreover, the book is compiled as a report on the actions in a video game. Since I'm a fan of classical genres, it confuses me a little, but you can get used to it. In general, not bad. The world is strict, epic and gloomy, all the heroes are in their places, the main character Erik has simple and understandable goals, he does not rush to save the world like a comic book hero, but strives to achieve very specific goals. Alas, the motivation of the higher forces that brought the protagonist back to life remains unclear. Perhaps this will be explained in later chapters. The narration is good - the author's language is simple, concise and clear, you will not fall asleep while reading.

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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Eric is brutal as a rock in the middle of a storm and elegant as a rhinoceros knocking down a tree. The Weavers of Fate knew who to bet on. However, it is not yet clear why they needed it.

    Ch 5 Ch.4
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    here Erik became like a typical MMA fighter :)

    Eat, train, rest, repeat; and occasional chores, he somehow managed to turn into training sessions.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Oh, he should have taken a spear and learned to ride :) But a magic boxer is also not bad. A weapon that cannot be lost, cannot be taken away, and that is always with you.

    Damn the axe, praise the fists!
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Useful practice. But is the old butler a reliable defender? Even in a well-protected home location.

    Assassins from subordinate clans, the Celeste Empire, the Uzel Magic Kingdom, or anyone else who sought to overthrow them could try taking a Basara child's life.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    It's like I'm in a video game, but I'm not playing, I'm reading :)

    Ch 4 Ch.3
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    smart boy)

    Well, not that Erik counted on him. He had learned long ago there was no one other than himself he could count on in this clan.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Wird is something of an experience (EXP) in video games combined with rating points?

    Warriors mainly focused on Martial Arts, increasing their wyrd through physical training.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Eric is too focused on axes. There are better weapons - for example, a spear - a weapon of victory! Especially for a cavalryman. Or protazan - a spear with a wide blade and a guard. However, this is the author's business.

    It granted innate talent for axes—this one Erik lacked—a body more resilient to higher and lower temperatures, increased physical resistance, increased strength, agility, and stamina, slight poison resistance and immunity to any common diseases, faster body growth, and a dreaded bloodline ability; the blessing was marked on his status by (+) next to his physical capabilities.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Judging by your description, Erik's mother was a strong shaman. Therefore, it is logical that the gift was passed on to her son.

    Axemanship was not his path, but he could feel an inexplicable connection to shamanism, probably why the Weavers granted it in the first place.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    Very convenient - a typical medieval fantasy world, and the hero has all the statistics in front of his eyes in the form of a convenient text. Is he a Terminator? :) It seems that the Weavers of Fate have provided Eric with a built-in cyber implant)

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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    And that's right! A true aristocrat is not the one who lives at the expense of his subordinates, but the one who is able to lead them. And in order to become like that, you need to understand the problems and desires of ordinary people. And you can understand them only by participating in their lives personally.

    Since a year ago, servants were instructed not to help him with chores, supposedly, it would teach him about the lower class circumstances.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    you mean one piece of furniture converted into another? For example, there was a table and they made a small bed out of it?

    His small room was composed of recycled furniture, stone walls and, thankfully, a fireplace to warm up the frigid atmosphere.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    The situation is beginning to clear up. Eric has a long and difficult path ahead of him. Let the Weavers of Fate throw him a couple of cheat codes :)

    Ch 2 Ch.2
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Lovidar5
    Lovidar51yr
    Commented

    The exploits will wait- it looks like Eric will have to pee in his panties for several years first and learn to speak :)

    'This is it, the chance to seize glory, honor—'
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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