Pasquale_20

I have to say that this novel hit me hard, there are many new novel on this app, generally always with the same premises; but this novel is different, i think it has a really strong base, one of it's best quality is the pace, it's not too slow or too fast, i can't describe it well but i hope it will not rush things, most novel do this and becomes awful. The power system is really good at the moment (for now we only now basic informations on tecnique or like body tempering 1 layer but how it is portrayed is good, for now we only have the basics and i am curious too see its development) the character is not but he has it's humor, i hope we will see more of his personality, goals and ambitions. One small flaw has to be the world building, i can't imagine it, it's like thing happen but not where (some little descriptions are not but, obiously not many paragraph of desvriptions). Next i think that the future of the novel could be really interesting, he wants to chose a military school, i really like this idea.

Really good novel, a little bit slow for now, i read about 120 chapters, but i must say that it is really stable. I like the MC, he is hard working, he knows how to navigate the world (obviously he must learn many things but he is intelligent, so you will face an MC that know what to do). One thing i would like to see is a dominering aura, his rutlness (sorry for my english), right now it's ok because he is gaining momentum but i hope he will have a bigger presence, if you know what i mean. Last but not least, i would like to see more, like his aspirations, relationship and soo on. To coclude i want to say that this novel has much potential, start to read!

Author i hope you can clarify things, it can sound arrogant but i really want to know what is the direction of this novel and these relationship

This story i really different from the others of the same genre, the Mc is really good, he is intelligent, funny? Interesting; he fits really well in the story! For the moment, the story is progressing in a good way. Im curious to see wath happens next

I think this novel is good, it's really similar to other novel but between them, this novel distinguish herself because how the story goes forward and ho ther power of the Mc developes. The progress it's not too fast or too slow, it's really good for now, i hope it won't change, i dropped other similar novel because all of a sudden, the progress was too fast. The world building is good, i receive a good feeling. My only preoccupation is that the Mc will be bland, with no emotion or connection and that there will be no other important character in the novel

This novel has a really good plot and story, it is well structured, and each charcter is really coerent with his emotion e bearing, like the two scholars and the girl. The mc is really intelligent, i like his intercations with the "plot". The power system it's not bad, is different from other novels, but i think it could have a little bit more of explanation. The story is going in a good way, hope we will see more of the mc and that he wont be a mindless dao seeking mc, but one with emotion. The only problem of this novel is the world building, it's not a problem per se but it's a little bland. Hope this novel will have succes!

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