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DannyLove2yrPostedWell-written so far! Makes me wonder what journey the thing in the box his parents left him will make him go through. BTW, the new book name looks much better than the old one, too.
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this title! isnt it true for losers? lol
Hating Rich People - DannyLove2yrCommented
I can't help but lol. This is brilliant!
"Grade 1 Systems are those functioning in mortal limits. Examples are Monetary System, Dating System, Engineer System, etc. Grade 2 Systems function in a magical limit. Examples are Vampire System, Magical System, Dungeon System, etc. Grade 3 Systems function in the immortal limit. Examples are Cultivation System, Primordial System, Bullshit System, etc. And finally, reigning at the top are Grade 4 Systems that are involved with time itself. Examples are Time System, Reincarnation System, Transmigration System, etc." - DannyLove2yrCommented
GOOD QUESTION
"Why? You're asking me why?" The monster roared in laughter like it had heard the funniest of all things, "You should have asked that at the start when I appeared in your body. Why did I appear in your body, when you had zero redeeming qualities? Why did I pick you and give you an opportunity to change your life? Why, out of the seven-plus billion people, did I choose you? Did you ever ask about it back then?" - DannyLove2yrCommented
Isn't this interview too short?
"I am naught but a human…" The host lady muttered with an enlightened gaze before announcing with a loud voice to the audience, "That's all, everyone! Give a round of applause to our chief guest, Compass Carburettor." - DannyLove2yrCommented
For a fully grown man, 45 of age, who had gone through so many killings, such reactions seem too immature. The MC's behaviour had better match his age or background, otherwise, it will look like the author, rather than the MC, has reincarnated.
''Who said that?!'' I yelled in panic while looking behind me, but no one was there. - DannyLove2yrCommented
If the MC serves in the army, that is acceptable, otherwise ...
In the end... In pursuit of true challenge, I went and killed many people... - DannyLove2yrCommentedCh 5 Starting Stats
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Easy to count, though.
The currency denomination was not too complicated and pretty straightforward. One hundred copper coins equaled a silver coin and one hundred silver coins equaled a gold coin. - DannyLove2yrCommented
The other settings are reasonable, but this is really ridiculous. It is impossible as far as I can imagine.
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What if he bought all those things and found out in the end that what he had experienced was nothing else but a dream? LOL
Though the inevitable future still terrified him a little, he also couldn't help but feel a vague excitement and anticipation coursing through his veins. - DannyLove2yrCommented
WELCOME RYLEE, LET QUINN HAVE UR BLOOD AND U CAN FEEL AT HOME
Quinn immediately recognised the voice. It was Rylee. It looked like he still hadn't learnt his lesson and was still up to his old tricks. - DannyLove2yrCommented
please mind your spelling and grammar, too many mistakes already, dear
And it truly felt like Layla was telling the truth. Not only that but Layla seemed to be more knowledgeable about vampires then himself. Perhaps she would even be able to help him in his research. - DannyLove2yrCommented
OH DEAR
"I saw you lifting, that boy's neck, at the time I thought you doing something else cause I couldn't see clearly," Layla said as her ears started to heat up a little. "But after what you had done to me, it confirms it." - DannyLove2yrCommented
OH GOSH! LOOKS LIKE U REALLY DO NEED A PROOFREADER OR EDITOR.
"Vorden, what happened is everything all right?" Peter asked.