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every encounter in his journey feels forced. meeting a poacher and ends with a new pokemon. so many bug trainers challenge him until he fights back. ash forcing him into battling. when people ask if he is a trainer, all he needs to say is NO. all leads him to challenge the gyms when Misty asks him to give a letter to her sister, he will probably lead him to a gym battle. all he needs to do is go to vermilion city and then cinnabar island to finish his task. author needs a better reason for him to travel.
my problem with his current team is that he has no gym pokemon. he has pokemon he uses to battle, but not everyone is as strong as red. His first pokemon should be a freebie to the challenger to see the level the trainer is at. He needs pokemon of each level for his gym matches. From rookies trainers to ace trainers, pokemon are needed to be a good trainer.
This shows both the light and darkness of pokemon. The bond and journey with your pokemon. overall great content and story. Hopefully, the author can continue the story and not stop writing since I'm hooked on the potential of this pokemon fanfic.
latias or latios
feels unnecessary
Good novel and has huge potential. Will the mc take a long time before he learns more of the world he is in and the common sense most cultivators have in the world. Will he know which realm he is in and how to teach others how to cultivate. As someone who is powerful, I would like to know the power structure a cultivator in each realm can do.
i would love that this can be a whole mini arc with arvina looking for him or nux saving her after being caught
I read 600 chapters, and I want to know if you ever plan to have arvina skyfall be in the harem after nux left the forbidden land. Like after the seal broke, she rose her cultivation and went searching for him. i read there was a timeskip, and her life might have ended, but I kinda like her to be in the harem
Did his mom have anything to do with the heroine betryal.
wish I read this earlier. you could have made an evil organization use his business to steal and people stop buying his stuff.