Really well done chapter

Absolutely

This is a really well done novel, I believe the lore and Worldbuilding of it is absolutely expansive and the only I’d really say as any form of notes is the characters feel a bit cliche, but this doesn’t really distract from the well written plot

Is absolutely agree, the world needs to expand!

Really well done chapter

Well done, great concept you’ll get to something soon im sure. I believe if you’re finding motivation to be a problem, take a step back and a break. Rest can absolutely help you start something as daunting as writing a novel. But truly best of luck to you my friend. Have a good day.

Absolute facts

Really well done, loving the storytelling & character build so far to a hopefully promising novel

having had the chance to catch up and binge through from around 10 chapters or so the plot and world building of Tharix is still heading in a steady progression. I however have noticed a certain blending of characters, where at least where we are currently left (chapter 19) some of the most notable characters feel rather eerily similar, not quite basic nor cookie cutter just, similar. However this does leave the room for those who stand out to REALLY stand out, those coming to mind being adende, gisla & liza. regardless though, the Worldbuilding and paced plot makes up for this minor fault. tldr: still really well done, will definitely still be reading along with hopes that the novel once again reaches the heartfelt & living character interactions that the first few chapters bolstered.

tharix: tale of an orphaned mage is a thriller of a fantasy novel so far. brilliant adventure and drama done by a well spoken and well written author. true literature & poetry in motion, top marks to you, really. especially in the overtaking of the ship and spirit, a true turn that was unique to this world and one that i can only find myself accepting here.