Please don’t take my comment as negative I am just asking and if not to big of a spoiler can you tell me what your are going to do with the grandson also can you do some more with will kids I like to think there is going to be a rivalry between wills kids and the saltun grandson that’s if he survives

I like your story but how can the sisters be okay with there bothers being killed like do they know that there father smuggled out his grandson

Man I just love this chapter I hope you do more with Tyler like maybe a pov of his life and how he rose to that position

Have my power stones I need new chapters

No please don’t quit this story please

Bro please make your story be deiffent then the rest like he don’ have to go to war or anything like that but like he should stop actin like a beta male

Ok I just did not know thanks for the information

The chapter was really good but is Percy like co-leader of the revolutionary army or like wha is his placed in it sorr just got like a little confused

You right

Really late to the story like it a lot ……………………………………………………………………….……………………………….………………………………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Really like the story so late to read it though

You are right my guy

Like the way the story going keep it up

You are so right

Bro you so right

I like the way the story going keep up the good work plz don’t drop