Alif_Al_Islam_6008

No harem it's became too messy 😕😕

Your character development is very bad

Dimensions system magic mostly relay on your mental realms how powerful your dimension magic it depends how powerful your mental realms is

Overall quality of the story is good. Need to keep going forward. Please don't drop this story. It has lots of potential to become a very good fanfiction novel. So far I have read a lot of fanfiction novel about "Jobless reincarnation" but it's best on out there.

New ch please

When will the next chapter come