John230

The Story Is Good But The Chapters Was Too Short And The Begining Of Story Progress Was Also Too Slow But All In All Is Interesting My Suggestion Is Too Make The Chapter Longer And Add A Little More Mystery But Not Too Mysterious And Give A Little Clues /Easter Eggs In The Story Because Currently Your Story Topping Gives Me A Unique Filling I Ready Many Fanfic Story About Genshin And Honkai Connected Story But Your Story Maybe Have A Chance To Stand Out Among Other Stories Just Keep Up The Good Writing

Hello Author just asking when The Rewrite Going to Release?

Hope You Upload or Update Again Really Love The Story's You Create

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This Guy Really Asking For A Beating

Thank For Doing A Dino Fanfic Really Thank You Hope For More

That Can Be Understand Because Of FGO Goetia (Maybe) Take Thousands Of Years So No Suprise There

Thank for Chap VOIDKING Hope For More😁😁😁

Yeah Keep Him Now Her Like That Because Now She Is Type-Earth So Mybe Became More Like Gaia Or Alaya In Nasuverse If Possible Because In DxD IM THINKING And MANY OTHER UNIVERSES That LOOKS ARE REALLY DOMINANT And NO ONE WILL DISAGREE ABOUT THAT