I did get that part, but how do they lock eyes, if she was blindfolded. I think it even happens again later on. That part confused me a bit.

Wasn't she blindfolded, though?

Wouldn't the simple solution be to enforce the new law: no bloodslaves allowed? Mauve is his wife and she is staying willingly. Just make it the rule that humans can stay as guests, if treated decently, and get Vae out.

Quick question. Why is this man doing the dishes? Didn't he have a really painful injury on his hand? Soaking that in dishwater doesn't sound like the brightest idea.

From here on, the it is just the a repetition of the previous text.

I think something went wrong with paragraphs, editing or comments. I see my paragraph comment on every paragraph. Some technical issue I guess. So happy to see you back though :)

Health way through this Paragraph u start to repeat the previous scene in slightly different wording, probably an editing mistake.

Is anybody else having problems with purchasing privilege on this book? I just get a blank page, when I try. Does someone know a fix for that? I'd love to continue reading.

Ah, so Sir Galath is a horse now and his name is Clair. XD Sorry, this had me cracking up. I guess he came over with her horse.

A sight for sore eyes discribes something pleasant to look at. Seeing how angry Jael is to see him, I doubt that that is what he meant. Maybe you could find a different wording.

I like him already :D

We just had moonlight falling through the trees now sunlight hitting the lake. What time of day is it? They weren't possibly on that motorcycle the whole night to arrive at the lake in the morning?

He died. He supposedly committed suicide, after they searched for Ruby at his clinic. I think it might have been the consequences of the bloodpackt with the werewolfs.(the supernatural NDA thing). They accidentally told him an Ruby's parents about werewolfs and than they all died.

As far as I understand, vampires in this world are born and not created. Which means, turning her is not possible and thus not an option

Now I feel bad for being so harsh with my comment. I personally prefer past tense and I enjoyed your writing. I feel that switching between tenses midstory is a bit confusing. There have also been chapters where you seem to be switching back and forth between past and present. Really confusing and a bit distracting. My tip would be to stick to past tense in this story and maybe write a different one in the future in present tense, if you enjoy doing that. That way your readers are not confused by sudden style changes. Of course it is your story and I don't think you have to apologize for your decisions or have to change it for one reader. I hope this was somewhat helpful. Keep up the good work

I am kind of confused and annoyed that the whole chapter was written in present tense. You normally write in past tense

I dare Jael to call his wife a pet. He will spend the next week sleeping on the couch.

As far as I can remember Selene is actually their cousin not their sister. They just act like siblings, because they were raised together by the grandfather. So Ethans, Liams and Ronans mom would be her aunt.

I don´t understand how she can be that forgiving. Ivan had her kidnapped, mocked her together with everyone else when she said she wanted to go home, had her straved, blackmailed her into subission and made fun of her, when her only family died. But now that he and everyone else are nice to her, all is forgiven?! Also their 180° turn in behavior doesn´t make any sense. Shure they might pity her for her loss but they could mock her for her beeing miserable before. Why stop now? Am I just to petty? I want him to regret his initial behavior towards her. He has to suffer befor I can forgive him, but I don´t see that coming with how easy she seems to forgive.

I am a little bit confused how a paler is a "sight for sore eyes" with how gross looking it is described to be. I guess the author misunderstood the phrase and ment that it is unpleasant to look at?