Not at all, I understand and I'll fix the typos.

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Not bad at all. I love the story. Though the writing quality could be worked on I can see this making a real impact on the world. Keep it up author!

typos? Where?

For some clarification, I have rewritten the entire story. Took me a bit but here we are...!

Working on the typos and stuff, thank you for your kind review!

Thank you : )

I'm SOO glad you liked it!

dawg what

I understand why you have lost interest, but you do know he doesn’t know much of anything in this world, right? In his eyes he’s just trying to grow stronger and a teacher is insulting him so he leaves, WHICH I LATER HAVE HIM RELIZE HIS IGNORANCE. That’s why he could be labeled as “stupid” and I even said in the first chapter, the MC was nothing special in his old life. You do know I made him stupid on purpose, its called character development, I seriously reccomend at least catching up. Though I guess its hard for anyone to understand with such low chapters.

Firstly, I see you're an author as well, which is pretty sad considering this comment, dude, he didn't get kicked out, he chose to leave. Did you even read it? And the system is a mystery, which is explained in later chapters. because the MC is joyful, it doesn't make him seem like a child, it only makes him look naive. He isn't. keep reading and you will see I've expanded on his character more, please, wait until you've caught up before spewing your thoughts. Also, how does the system not help the MC? She literally shows him out to conjure mana... Keep reading. Thank you for the read though!

You can’t expect an explanation for everything, I’ve later explained it, read over new chapters. Thank you for your feedback though!

You’re the best , I’l try and fix the errors ☺️

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This story is a draft for a friend, far from the final product, but enjoy I guess... :) Ps: don't cry, you will find no one... Hahahahah..!

No problem.

"Geda was able to handle It only because he had one light In his life" Sounds better, imo It is kinda weird to read "though"