nice work ,but could you write in pov of senna rather than 3rd person pov ,it would give a more personal feeling and also just a suggestion for love interest -sadie sink or leni klum
keep this up
Girls from Naruto - mikoto,kushina ,tsume,tsunade,mabui,samui,Kurenai,anko,Yūgao,koyoki
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in the training of Naruto make Shikamaru give Naruto a dose of reality and turn him into a serious shinobi ,who understands that teammate like sakura should not physically abuse him