FluffyBunnyKing282
"Fate had us meet as foes, but this Ring, will make us brothers" - Gravemind Halo 2
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FluffyBunnyKing2821yrPostedAll of these chapters will be removed, not now though, but they will in the future because the edits I will be making will change the majority of the chapters by A LOT. I will remove this message once I redo all of the chapters to get them to a better point... hopefully... but this will take a long time, and my life is kind of hectic so updates will be very hard to manage. You should know that from when I stopped working n this for 3 months... I'm gonna try to not let that happen again, but, no promises. And I know that putting a universe that is from an artist in here is probably not a good idea... seeing as I fucked up a ton of things when going into that... but I will fix those, and that is one reason why I thought about deleting this story, or at least the chapters. And honestly, if you put a 1-star review here, well, at least you would be saying something, or at least I hope you would say something, or else that 1-star would be kind of pointless. but then again you might want to wait because the edits I am going to make are BIG edits, I'm talking this isn't even going to be the same STORY big, I mean it's still the same story, but, with a lot of changed aspects. and the 1-star is my opinion on how good this story is, at least at the stage it is right now... the 3 stars on my other comment was when I was an idiot. But now my eyes are wide open and I see... I'm still an idiot.
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Okay now it appears to only work with reviews again this is purely exp based... sorry, not sorry
We all live in a planet that while a hub for Covenant and Human trading, although it often feels like we're in the middle of freakin' nowhere, especially since we're in a bit of a more rural town about two hundred miles from the nearest major city or space port. I personally like this as it means its just us and nobody else - excluding the three hundred and fifty something people in this town with us - which allows a lot of peace. Plus, you can see the stars really well, as there's almost no light pollution due to an unspoken rule to turn lights off between four PM and six AM. The planet is incredibly similar to Earth, with a diameter literally just five percent larger while it's overall average mass is just low enough that the gravity of this planet is barely above that of Earth. Plus, it rotates just a tiny bit faster, meaning there's almost an exact twenty-four hours in the day down to the second. The atmosphere, other than lacking most of the pollutants Earth has, is really similar, with about ten percent more oxygen however, which makes it a bit easier to extract pure oxygen for giving me and the two other Cursed in this town breath - we cannot breathe anything other than pure oxygen as part of the genetic disease we have, the results would be horrible if we were to stop -, so that's a plus. - FluffyBunnyKing2822yrCommented
EXP based comment... sorry, not sorry (didn't work the first time)...........................................................................................................
We all live in a planet that while a hub for Covenant and Human trading, although it often feels like we're in the middle of freakin' nowhere, especially since we're in a bit of a more rural town about two hundred miles from the nearest major city or space port. I personally like this as it means its just us and nobody else - excluding the three hundred and fifty something people in this town with us - which allows a lot of peace. Plus, you can see the stars really well, as there's almost no light pollution due to an unspoken rule to turn lights off between four PM and six AM. The planet is incredibly similar to Earth, with a diameter literally just five percent larger while it's overall average mass is just low enough that the gravity of this planet is barely above that of Earth. Plus, it rotates just a tiny bit faster, meaning there's almost an exact twenty-four hours in the day down to the second. The atmosphere, other than lacking most of the pollutants Earth has, is really similar, with about ten percent more oxygen however, which makes it a bit easier to extract pure oxygen for giving me and the two other Cursed in this town breath - we cannot breathe anything other than pure oxygen as part of the genetic disease we have, the results would be horrible if we were to stop -, so that's a plus. - FluffyBunnyKing2822yrCommented
EXP based comment... sorry, not sorry...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
We all live in a planet that while a hub for Covenant and Human trading, although it often feels like we're in the middle of freakin' nowhere, especially since we're in a bit of a more rural town about two hundred miles from the nearest major city or space port. I personally like this as it means its just us and nobody else - excluding the three hundred and fifty something people in this town with us - which allows a lot of peace. Plus, you can see the stars really well, as there's almost no light pollution due to an unspoken rule to turn lights off between four PM and six AM. The planet is incredibly similar to Earth, with a diameter literally just five percent larger while it's overall average mass is just low enough that the gravity of this planet is barely above that of Earth. Plus, it rotates just a tiny bit faster, meaning there's almost an exact twenty-four hours in the day down to the second. The atmosphere, other than lacking most of the pollutants Earth has, is really similar, with about ten percent more oxygen however, which makes it a bit easier to extract pure oxygen for giving me and the two other Cursed in this town breath - we cannot breathe anything other than pure oxygen as part of the genetic disease we have, the results would be horrible if we were to stop -, so that's a plus. - FluffyBunnyKing2822yrPosted
EXP based review... sorry, not sorry................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I'LL say it again... WHO NAMES THEIR CHILD OFF OF A FUEL???
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Who names there child off of a fuel?
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- FluffyBunnyKing2822yrCommentedCh 6 Chapter 6 - Fahliile
- FluffyBunnyKing2822yrPosted
I'd say bravo... I mean it's certainly a better story than mine, the writing style is... "interesting" to say the least, but there is no correct way to write so I can't say anything about that... but I'd say keep on writing, so far it seems interesting, the details pretty good, and overall I rate it 3.8 stars. So keep working, you seem to be doing good... so far.
- FluffyBunnyKing2822yrCommented
Ah yes, what everyone thinks when they did something easy
"Can't everyone do this?" - FluffyBunnyKing2822yrPosted
So this story is currently from what I heard from my friends, a good idea... but could've been executed a little better, which I understand from what I have been reading myself. So if your expecting a good all-rounder, this story won't be like that... For now, I am making updates and I am hoping that I can make it better in the future. Of course I probably won't start making changes yet because I want to get the story finished and have a good base so that I can start editing it from somewhere. So just give it while alright?
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You know now that I think about it this book gives me some mad vibes of another book that I forgot the name of. So basically in this book instead of someone travelling into the Minecraft Universe, Someone from the Minecraft universe travels into real life. I wish I could remember the name of it but that's what it kind of reminds me of.