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Okay, I've waited, and as expected. You dropped it. TBH, after the second third chapter, the story itself got messed up. Random plots and ultra random terms... I am doing great now, and another one of the LNs I was working with got completed this New Year's Eve. Though I gotta admit, when I returned to this story and saw just how messed up it was when I was looking for something more to do, I was really disappointed.
Respected Author, Kinesis I recall NYX shouting at the face of an idiot something like "They were innocent!?" And now I see them discussing how he was framed! Even in the previous chapter, that Female lead godess said "And you accepted all the blame?" but I didn't think much of it. Now, even if I didn't know this earlier; I could bet my 'proof reader' career that this is your first work. I'm really disappointed with this story. It had so much potential, but with every chapter, I doubt if the story will actually success. I'm sorry to say but if this keeps up, I might drop reading it. P.S. It seems that you still don't have a copyeditor. Have you had one, those major mistakes would've been taken care off in time. Yours truly, Shaman
I'm a proof reader of about 5 ongoing LNs and 4 completed ones. I was quite literally just wandering around and found an interesting work. If I ignore the ton of English errors, I guess that this one's got potential. I hope that the writer doesn't drop it midway. Since this is probably the first comment, I know that it should reach the writer. Hello, Mr. Kinesis. I advise you to get a copyeditor. Those guys may ask for a lot, but the returns are worth it. Stay healthy and safe.