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  • Shaman_0
    Shaman_01yr
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    Not satisfied anymore. Right after the first few chapters. ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ (Filling character reqs.)

    The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
    Fantasy · kinesis
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  • Shaman_0
    Shaman_01yr
    Replied to kinesis

    Okay, I've waited, and as expected. You dropped it. TBH, after the second third chapter, the story itself got messed up. Random plots and ultra random terms... I am doing great now, and another one of the LNs I was working with got completed this New Year's Eve. Though I gotta admit, when I returned to this story and saw just how messed up it was when I was looking for something more to do, I was really disappointed.

    The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
    Fantasy · kinesis
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  • Shaman_0
    Shaman_02yr
    Commented

    Respected Author, Kinesis I recall NYX shouting at the face of an idiot something like "They were innocent!?" And now I see them discussing how he was framed! Even in the previous chapter, that Female lead godess said "And you accepted all the blame?" but I didn't think much of it. Now, even if I didn't know this earlier; I could bet my 'proof reader' career that this is your first work. I'm really disappointed with this story. It had so much potential, but with every chapter, I doubt if the story will actually success. I'm sorry to say but if this keeps up, I might drop reading it. P.S. It seems that you still don't have a copyeditor. Have you had one, those major mistakes would've been taken care off in time. Yours truly, Shaman

    Ch 8 8: The Reason
    The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
    Fantasy · kinesis
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  • Shaman_0
    Shaman_02yr
    Replied to Shaman_0

    I think I'll remove a half star if the update frequency is this irregular. Honestly, I suggest a two week upload frequency since this seems to be your first work. you'll soon be adapted to it but be regular 😔

    The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
    Fantasy · kinesis
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  • Shaman_0
    Shaman_02yr
    Posted

    I'm a proof reader of about 5 ongoing LNs and 4 completed ones. I was quite literally just wandering around and found an interesting work. If I ignore the ton of English errors, I guess that this one's got potential. I hope that the writer doesn't drop it midway. Since this is probably the first comment, I know that it should reach the writer. Hello, Mr. Kinesis. I advise you to get a copyeditor. Those guys may ask for a lot, but the returns are worth it. Stay healthy and safe.

    The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
    Fantasy · kinesis
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