AshTheOverlord

I’ve read some harem stories that are actually good, but only when the author knows how to balance everything well and make it feel valid. Otherwise, I honestly don’t know how people can read that stuff—unless they’re just bored

As long as I can read about My glorious Red-Eyed King, I don’t mind the nerf 😭😭😭

DO IT!!! 😞😪

I hope Yuki is the FL 😔 [img=angry]

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Thank you for the sacrifice, kind sir. 😪[img=angry]

Tftc

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Can you tell me a bit about the future? I stopped reading after chapter 113

Sorry for my rant, but I’ll use this review to vent some of my frustration with this fanfic. First of all, I don’t even want to start on how annoyed I felt while reading this FF. If you’re bored and have nothing else to read, feel free to give this story a try. It all started well, with the MC making some progress with his power (being the strongest at the age of 11 💀), but everything went downhill once the Second Shinobi World War began. This is the first time an author has made me hate Kushina as a character. She’s so unbearably annoying that you actually find yourself hoping she dies (which, sadly, will never happen). She’s basically a worse version of Sakura—Sakura 2.0—but the only redeeming thing about her is that she’s an elite Jonin in terms of power. And yet, despite that, she contributes absolutely nothing. She doesn’t do anything impactful. This is honestly a first. The MC falls into the same tired trope of generic protagonists who hide their power or refuse to use it—When it matters—despite claiming they want to make a change. During the Second Shinobi World War, the author dragged out the fight against the Sand Village for over 30 chapters—for no reason. The MC kept saying he wanted to end the war—To get a reward from the system—something he could have done so easily, but instead, he did nothing. Every time he appeared on the battlefield, he let them retreat instead of finishing things. Like, why even talk about wanting to end the war if you’re not going to do shit when it actually matters? And after all that wasted time, the Sand Village just stopped attacking—not because of anything the MC did, but simply because they feared him. Meanwhile, when he was sent to the battlefield against the Mist Village he killed their Mizukage and a bunch of insignificant shinobi. And somehow, no one knew who did it? Even though it was obvious that the MC was the only one powerful enough to pull it off? And let me just remind you—the story hasn’t progressed much even by chapter 113. The only significant thing that has happened is that the MC is stronger than everyone else at the age of 11, while Kushina, Mikoto, and a little girl like Konan cling to him like their lives depend on it. (Tsunade being part of the harem is the only plus I’ll give this story 🥲). The MC only knows how to talk but doesn’t do shit, and it’s beyond annoying. I tried to bear with it, but I just couldn’t. I’ve reached my limit—for the first time in years…