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Katila_Siboe9mthCommentedI've read many books with the same plot, can it be a coincident that many authors write the same thing or it's an experience from real life, I've never seen a family that can turn their back on their own child sibling just because they didn't bring her up and protect a stranger who enjoyed the luxury and love that belonged to their own daughter, even if it's just a book
Ch 2 You’re So Noisy- Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
dinner is the last meal before bed, that's lunch author, maybe English is not your first language but because your book is read by many please get an editor with good English and who can differentiate the meaning of each word
Li Xu's meal was ready, "Jingyi, stay for dinner." - Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
Ji Jianguo has turned into another character called Shen Jianguo. Seriously, these are obvious mistakes that the author shouldn't make at all because he was the one who named his/her character and chose the names, too
Shen Mei was only 25 years old this year, eight years younger than Shen Jianguo. Her face was still full of collagen. Coupled with her big, watery eyes, Shen Jianguo naturally fell for her. - Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
is her gum rotten? we all have red gums once a tooth is removed
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I know it's just a novel but how does a Chinese become a British monarchy? it the story line based in Europe or China? investigating before you write would be great
It turned out that this Young Master was not only from the British Monarchy, but he was also the heir!detailThe Full-Leveled Healer Transmigrates to a Real and Fake Rich Daughter StoryGeneral · Sky Cold - Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
Sat down and took a seat is more less the same thing. he sat on the just vacated seat would be more appropriate.
The young man didn't mind. He immediately sat down and took a seat. - Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
fire is neither water nor food so it can't be boiled
Soon, the sorghum noodles and flour they brought were kneaded into balls. After Li Xiaoran taught them how to make steamed buns, she let Yuan Cheng and Mao Dao boil the fire and steam the steamed buns themselves. - Katila_Siboe9mthCommented
male wear not were
Males were red while females were green, and although it was not too difficult to catch a sighting of this bird when it was alone, it was extremely rare to see them in pairs. - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
different fathers or mothers?
As the three siblings of the Shi family stood behind her and stared at her, they felt as if they had seen their eldest brother. Although they had different fathers, they respected their eldest brother more than their father. All these years, they had grown up with pride because their eldest brother had helped them take on the pressure of the family.detailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
there is a difference between the gala and banquet, please take note of that
Not only were prominent families invited to the gala, but there were also many media outlets. Zhao Mian and Zhou Yan were very reliable and cautious. They specifically left a path for Yuan Shu so that she wouldn't be photographed by the reporters.detailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
no woman walks out of the bedroom without looking into a mirror especially when she's attending an important banquet, consider changing that author
When she was having makeup put on, Yuan Shu closed her eyes and rested for a while. She had been too tired for the past two days. When she woke up, the styling team had already finished everything. She didn't know what she looked like now.detailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
fullproof bit fool for a stupid person
Zhou Yan had been busy following Yuan Shu around during this period of time to ensure that the banquet was foolproof. At this moment, Yuan Shu was preparing for tonight's banquet.detailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
brother not son my dear author
"Mr. Tan, are you here to avenge your youngest son?" As Yuan Shu spoke, she sized up Tan Jing and suddenly understood why Shi Bin and Li Yue felt that she would be afraid of Tan Jing.detailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover - Katila_Siboe10mthCommentedCh 6 The Transmigrators
- Katila_Siboe10mthReplied to Katila_Siboe
your storyline is great and the book is really interesting if you need help editing let me know and I can review it for you for free since I like it, and you can take a look, there are many words though translated the give different meaning
He left City F, promising to return someday to take his revenge and dote on Chi Ai. - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
author can you please get yourself an editor who is knowledgeable in English, stop using the translator app, your English I really horrible most sentences don't make sense at all.
Wait for the queue? when was there any queue? And why did they were unaware of it? - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
Chi Ai booked tickets to city D, bodyguard waiting for the Mu guy to go to City B now he left for City F, does the author have a spilit personality
He left City F, promising to return someday to take his revenge and dote on Chi Ai. - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
why would you say four to five gangsters when you could actually give the exact number
They all started to laugh, there was four to five gangster at present. - Katila_Siboe10mthCommented
5am and breakfast at 7am, please author, these simple mistakes shouldn't be made only dinner would be made at 7pm
She followed her routine and went for a walk at 5 pm, made breakfast at 7 pm, and waited for her mother to have breakfast together. - Katila_Siboe10mthPosted
the book has a good plot and different from what I've read. kuddos
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