Zuesofolypus

i hate nerfs

+1

alice would be better after all he has been in hiding for over 100 years he needs the pep she brings and you should throw in a couple more like leah clearwater and if you are adding others like the underworld movie to the fic you should add selene as well. make the mc a sort of peace keeper between races created by nature or something so having a mate from each would make since.

i think you should give her a yuri harem that can help in her job, Hermione granger for the pure resurcher, lina lovegood for seeing the unseen, Daphne greengrass for the pureblood connection, fluer delacor for a magical creature connection , and add an older woman like Amelia bones for to ministry connection, the should be soul mates so they Can access raven's magic to help her job

again you add filler via irrelevant data to make enough words to post the chapter, i still think you need a small break as you seem to have burned out

the quality is getting worse by the chapter. its like you are rushing and each chapter is smaller as a result. in my opinion you should take a break and rest to refresh maybe afterwards you will bring the quality back up

just the one

that was a good chapter worth the wait

where is the chapter

are you going to continue this