A promising read, hopefully it keeps up the momentum established! The setting is definitely something I like and I hope you'll continue pumping out chapters!

Thank you I was a bit afraid it wasn't a good enough draw for some since there wasn't any action in the first chapter.

Thank you very much! There are some rough chapters up ahead at least to me but there are payoffs long term for story arcs still in development.

The Dark Hand is a looming threat but there are other dangers in this story I assure you

Going to rate my book so I can give people expectations on what to expect when reading my book. This story is one about a prince and 11 other major characters that'll share the spotlight as they approach and oncoming calamity that'll threaten the earth and their journey to become strong enough to combat it. The story might be a bit rough at times and there may be chapters that feel dragged out but I ensure there's usually a payoff. I post a chapter daily and plan on keeping this pace for the foreseeable future. The story starts out in the youth of the characters but will continue into their adult years and inevitably romance will blossom between characters if you are wondering if and when it may happen in this story. I hope anyone that is even slightly interested will follow the story and continue doing so until the 12 main characters become legends in their own right!

Thank you! , I've wanted to write an action-themed story for a while and I don't know how I compare to the other stories on here but I hope that there are people who like what I have to offer but I'm always looking for advice from readers!