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I chose Disney as the adversary because I wanted to give a significant and well-known opponent in our world without being too powerful. Disney isn't very strong in this context; it hasn't had its second golden age and isn't strong in publishing. It's a mid-to-upper-tier company, at the same level as Majestic Publishing currently, and it wanted to absorb Majestic Publishing to elevate itself.
In my native language his name is harold, so I got used to calling him like that.
My bad, I didn't pay attention. I will correct this. Sorry for that.
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate the gesture enormously. I started writing as a first step towards learning English, which explains the unnatural conversations. I am trying to improve and make progress. I hope you will join me on this journey and continue to give me advice. Regarding the first-person point of view, I was trying to bring a new perspective, but nothing important would be covered from any point of view other than William's. This approach is rare; it's meant to add a bit of freshness and explain the main character's actions without him having to do it himself. Thank you again for your comment.
Thank you for the constructive comment.