And it is certainly no longer comfortable to read about something with too radical changes.

Maybe some author advice...don't even make the plot so saccharine, I literally read more about a saccharine girl than about the story itself and the truth is it's so crinch that I almost vomited sugar

She could be all the more impressive but never shy on that level....

There is a story in your filling 🤦🏼‍♀️

Well, the truth is that your filling was so boring that I skipped almost the entire chapter... literally to launch an attack it's like 3 paragraphs, it's boring and stressful

#I'm a girl but I agree with men that most women are so annoying that they look for him but at the same time they complicate their lives 🤦🏼‍♀️

Has anyone else felt that the relationships they are building with other people (Stark) or others....is too forced and doesn't feel natural...e It's like when they ask you: Are you okay? And as a reflection you simply say CLEAR SUPER GOOD....it is something that is not felt naturally but in a forced way

Has anyone else felt that the relationships they are building with other people (Stark) or others....is too forced and doesn't feel natural...e It's like when they ask you: Are you okay? And as a reflection you simply say CLEAR SUPER GOOD....it is something that is not felt naturally but in a forced way

Now that you mention it, it is very pathetic and contradictory considering his level of existence.

Emm, the conversations take away the beauty of the fanfic...they are so unnatural and dry that you don't feel the situation or scenario that I am reading...it would be fantastic if the author paid attention to them. That

And not even a joke could they have captured him...with his literally multiversal power, with an anomaly in his emotions he could have destroyed the planet or part of it.

His attitude is a bit krinch and inconsistent...he didn't act that way even in childhood and the truth is it is very frustrating that they change his entire personality on a whim and he The plot made by the author.

This is so forced....even a little bit nice, it's totally krinch and I even skipped most of the capital which is boring and unnecessary Not to mention that they haven't gone more than 6 chapters and he's already looking for a woman...it's totally disgusting

And here the forced plot begins......along with the personality change that literally did not feel like you were reading about a transmigration simply about a new character

We'll see how it goes with a depressive, self-destructive protagonist who believes that everyone owes him while he wallows in his insignificant existence along with his cowardice.

I love it...but everything tends to be a lot of filler or, to sum up, too much description for absolutely everything.

The forced relationships you're making are a bit krinch...but the rest is acceptable, except for his internal monologues

Well another loud protagonist..🤢🤮

It's the first time I read a fanfic that is ruined by the author in the first chapter 😵