you some how took a great idea good back story and great character and managed to make it very boring to read i got to ch 130 and something like 80 chapters are just skill or technique descriptions and the mc monologing about ideas for more skill/techniques
Amazing character creation the plot has yet to fully develope at this point but alot of backround is being created for both the mc and other main characters. fantastic so far
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Tyler_Regal2yr
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule