Daoist_Cv4412

Worlds seems interesting, but the rest is not as good. - after free chapters translation gets worse. It's readable but annoying. - character (author) forgets about anyone that is not directly included in the story right this second. - MC seems to use very thick plot armour. Or the world is low on IQ Overall... skip it

Story seems to be fine but.... 1. Needs a lot of editing. Sentences can get very strange. 2. Starts a chapter with a big chunk of last chapter's end.

I read Racoon city it too, and only realised my mistake when I read your comment 🤣

I like the characters and the story, it seems to be developing in an interesting direction. I hope it will keep getting. new chapters