Vijay_Shanker

I want to know about y did u lower the system value and give importance to harem based things.From start to end u only give importance to womens and other low activity. sorry for the offends.

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I think you make Long tian with a system & a heroin.y did u criticize ur own hero like a .

Good work but also not good to get many interest

Come on,please.And also add some love relationship.

Are u expanding a summary with any words.

please,continue on like this.It's very interesting .

your story title is interesting..But y r u narrate the full of 30 chapter with same concept.Don't involve too much bragging technique.

you are wasting 19 chapters of this concept and making half of the readers lost its interest

what kind of story start with this concept?