This is a story brimming with potential! It offers a unique premise based on a futuristic society obsessed with enhancements and a protagonist transported from our modern world. There's a great blend of humor and intriguing world-building, making it a fun read. A few key areas could use some polish, but overall its good read. Writing Quality: Your writing is clear and easy to follow especially for lemon scenes. Stability of updates: Low, Only 3 to 4 chapters per week. Author please increase update speed. Story Development: The pacing is a bit slow, focusing mainly on two characters until recently. More characters are being introduced in latest chapters. Character Design: The main character, Nox, could use more depth. His internal monologues are hilarious, but his personality needs further development. Supporting characters like Lyra, Thea are well-defined and engaging. World building: It's okay for now Final note: This story is suitable for anyone looking for well-written steamy scenes and humorous moments – Nox's internal struggles are a highlight. With greater attention to world-building, faster updates, and further development of Nox's character, this novel could become a real gem.

TFTC

4k words .... I have published those many words it's still not vetted... It must be because it's weekend. Anyway thanks for the confirmation 👍

Yes, I wanted to check if book has vetted or not so I used repeat chp

No, I stopped writing for some reason but now I have resumed you can search books name and read chapters

Nah I had some college stuff going on thus I put an hold on the writing but now I have started to write again.

No I have started updating

Welcome, Can you help me check if my book is supporting power stone? Because it's not accepting from my side

I will be updating this one.. But my main focus would be that book

There is? Could You tell me the name?

It seems short because all previous chapters were having 2000 words and this one has 1k words which is normal length

This one or that one?

Transmigrated to prehistoric period, Something similar to Stone age .

Business

Thanks for your suggestion; I will work on the character development

Welcome, By the way, if you have any suggestions, then do tell.😁

Thanks for your opinion and I am happy that you liked the story so far. There are error in character and story but I would improve it as I gain more experience

Hahaha I understand your meaning now

What's it suggestion?

Now that you mention, It's really not appropriate