My man, you've a pretty extensive piece. I've added it to my library but unfortunately I don't have as much time these days. I like what I've read so far but it hasn't been much. But the review will be a bit late, till I catch up to the latést one.

Idk why people think this is a good fic but I can't help but disagree. In my honest opinion it's a below average quality fic which degrades the original ideas, not an upgrade so to speak. Minato's talents are nerfed so much so that he probably matches upto "Academy level obito" right now. The training decisions are totally brain-dead. The devil fruit ability is a place holder text to increase word count, serves no purpose at all. It's making mockery of Naruto and One Piece at the same time. And the character lack any sort of depth. I mean the author really tried, the effort can be seen but the execution is mediocre at best.

Brother, he's a slave now. Thoroughly enjoying his happily ever after rotting away in slavery and in delusions of grandeurs of power and glory. TF you talking about OPness? You're right about him having OP powers but you didn't take into account about how moronic he can be... It pretty much cancels out all those OP powers.

Better fic? Character development? More OP than the OG? In how many chapters? 1k ? I'm sorry, Are we even reading the same thing?

Pretty much the holy relic for the weak MC lovers eh... That's not bad but if I see Dante in the name of a fic, I expect to see Dante in that fic. Not some average Walmart Joe floundering around... My only complaint would be, just Don't add any OP character's name into the title of the fic, if you're not gonna deliver anyway. Just name it "Average Slave in Marvel with a shitty template" and be done with it.

Maybe the Author has a torture fetish?

Well, from my observation if you're goal is to get into any of those top ranks then the main key would be consistency... On this platform, if you're uploads are consistent then it doesn't really matter if the story is mediocre, you can thrive and even monetize it. But that aside, as a working individual myself I understand. Can't really give up the job that pays the bills. I am in the same boat afterall.

Agreed. This is not really a good fiction. Most of the chapters are info-dump summaries. So far everything for the MC has been about wasting time. I could've endured it had there been any kinda development but there's been nothing at all.

So much wasted time and so much wasted chapters...

Another one bites dust, even before reaching New World... and people ask why I don't like when they expand upon the Yggdrasil Gaming arc...

No no no. Do it only once more with Zeus 🌚 That's all I ask for.

I mean I definitely don't see the appeal now after that explanation but you do you mate.

Keep it short and simple. Would say 2 but it's dxd so let's go with 3.

Get him any number of years of "training", just summarize it in 2 or 3 chapters. Coz getting training time is a rare occurence and one should pack as much as one can during these times imo. But as readers we don't really want to read 'same-ish" chapters for more than 5 chapters. So, getting done with it in 2-3 chapters would be optimal.

Hercules method, absolutely yes. Martial arts and Skills? He already has more than enough upgradable ones I think. Just taking them to the peak would be more than enough for most of the verses (except for Eldritch ones and Warhammer 40k 🙂).

Nah, Humanity for the win. Sacred Gear was meant for humans to use. True Longinus user being human is even more poetic. He already has Zenkai. And he can create new skills and powers, he needn't get bloodlines imo. Get him something like Marvel mutants powers. Idk if Reality Marbles from Fate, count as skills or tools. But there are a lot of great ones there.

Time to make more orphans eh? For the Greater Good ofcourse.

There might, there might not. But most likely there are reasons(coz you're not really amateur at writing) and they might be good in their own right. But again, I personally don't like to see crippled MCs. I know it's too much to ask for but I like them with their limbs intact. It's a personal fault I guess but it is what it is. Although I wouldn't be able to continue but it was great while it lasted. I was invested and curious throughout the whole thing. For that you have my thanks. Good luck in your writing journey.

What's with authors loving Cripple MCs these days. It started so great but you just had to permanently cripple the MC. For what? Just to show that he's weak. It achieved the purpose well and for that I applaud you but from this point I can't really enjoy the story anymore(it's a matter of personal preference I guess)

Blood of the First men, at first glance sounds cool but tbh feels a bit redundant. HP magic and FMA Alchemy on the other hand would be really cool to see! But most importantly I would like to see his spear combat improve and be used in some huge wars. Personally I'd also like for his Longinus to get an upgrade to become "Longinuslanze Testament" somehow... ;)