Jonathan_Riley_8829

why not just leave the residents of Morgan town in Morgan Town? Why make them up and leave everything just to come back make their own homes again? who's going to cultivate the land at Morgan Town if you bring them all back to your territory? it honestly feels like a waste of resources, time and energy. keep some soldiers there to guard the town and let the people do their damn jobs.

of all the country names you could come up with why indiana?

what do you mean hundreds? when did he get hundreds?

senip= penis, aginav=vagina.

the hell is a semen knife car? Google has nothing on this. author come up with real things or stop trying

your messing up again author

what in the hell is all this stuff all of a sudden? all I'm seeing is more and more Chinese stuff instead of simple fantasy stuff

what is a Weng city?

please fix the Grammer and translations. Ross becomes rose constantly. The wolf names keep changing. Lynn keeps turning linn yang. there's also a bunch of other Chinese names that keep getting thrown around. it gets a little old. the story development so far is good but if the constant name swaps and grammer don't improve I'm going to drop the book and drop my rating even farther.

hey author, you good? I think you messed up your translation there