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Peter_Paul_Anka1mthCommentedCh 98 Challengers Approach- Peter_Paul_Anka2mthCommented
Hera Familia had one level 9 and Zeus Familia had a level 8
This was something that had never happened in Loki Familia, a level that only one figure in all of Orario had reached even after searching far and wide. - Peter_Paul_Anka10mthCommented
shouldn't he have almost infinite stamina thanks to his starter power, I'm not sure but I think somewhere here you said that?
With those words, Cedric renewed his resolve and focused his energy again. His body was still recovering from the previous battle, and his stamina was waning, but he knew he had to press on. He called upon his armament haki to bolster his defenses. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
You definitely need to change that. With how this is going it would take him more than 8 million exp to level up to level 16, so learning the truth behind the D clan won't even put him at level 20. Unless you make it so the value of each state doubles for every level then you are going to have a mess. If you are taking suggestions I would recommend measuring stats and skills by grades, not numbers, for example, Strength: C-, or swordmanship: Novice, or something like that. And in order to increase the you would have to take quests. If you choose letters, like C- you could make it so in the same rank you can train them. Example: to go from Strength C- to C or from C to C+ you have to lift 1 ton a thousand times or something. But to change the letter you have to beat someone with a superior strength. That way you still keep the essence of getting stronger by beating stronger foes. Regardless is pretty important to change the numbers behind exp otherwise it's going to be impossible.
'Damn I was right, the amount of EXP needed to level up doubles every time but the amount of stat points received remains the same, that seems unfair. Hopefully, it will change eventually or I actually am going to have to start bench pressing a mountain to gain a strength point in a decade or so.' - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrReplied to Daoist_Mandyana
They believe Bloodraven will do a ritual that will kill everything north of the wall except plants.
Ned smiled at his son and then explained. "Understand one thing Robb. There is no glory in war. Only sufferings and devastation. Glory in war is just words used in the South to attract hot blooded knights and men into the army. Our House has seen enough bloodshed in a short time. I have seen two wars while Aryan had seen one. Though we won both of them I pray to the gods that there will be no more war or bloodshed." Though his guts told him that his prayers were in vain. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrReplied to fearlessj2008
I mean I'm pretty sure they will be able, since Marwin can. I'm guessing all the other Starks, the wargs at least, should be able also.
Now with complete access to his magic he had warded Winterfell against all those with ill intents. He repeated the same in Moat Cailin and Sea Dragon Point too. Then he applied the soil magic he had learned to the farms surrounding Wintertown and to some areas beyond. The ritual left him exhausted for a week but the results were worth it. The yield had now more than doubled. Emboldened by the success he repeated the ritual in the rice farms in the Greywater marshes and at the Gift near the wall too which he planned to reclaim for the North. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
I'm not sure if I'm missing something but this was a really stupid decision. They could have captured the league's most important asset, Kurogiri and his Warp Gate.
The Warp Gate suddenly collapses in on itself, folding neatly into a slash at the center of it. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
Please don't classify every spell as a skill it will take you forever keep track and most of the word count will be useless skills, just group it smarter, for example everything that is directly shaped mana under mana manipulation, all fire magic under Fire manipulation or Fire magic as a skill it. It's the same for other skills for example, cooking, cleaning, etc under Household keeping and writings reading under literature skill or whatever. I have seen a lot of fanfics dropped because it got very overloaded with useless skills please don't go this route. You can explain it as a system update so the display isn't overloaded.
Mana Bolt Lv.1 - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrReplied to 95_novel_maniac_95
considering what we saw in the anime it takes him like 15 seconds to make a clone, let's be generous and asume just two clones a minute. That means in 2 hours there would be more Twices that atoms in the universe. That's OP
And Japan's 3rd is who walks out of the portal next--- - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrPosted
If you haven't started reading this, then don't start. After 100 chapters I can tell you this was one of the most painful reads I had. The author constantly contradicts themselves and the world he made. The is nothing natural about the development of the story, things just happen because the author says I does no matter how much it contradicts everything they has already been stated the power of PLOT will force it anyway. I'm sure if you started to read this at the beginning you haven't noticed how many contradictions there are but at this point it's just to painful to keep reading. That being said I can't really blame the author you CAN notice they get better but honestly the story was completely ruined with the flashbacks and the time travel, I'm pretty sure the author didn't realize how difficult it would be to keep track of them and by the time they did they were already way too deep and needed to keep them. At the end it was just one bad narrative decision that forced the plot and in order to correct it the story became forced. It had potential ad I'm sure it gets a lot better later on but if you are starting from the beginning the contradictions are just too much, but hey maybe you have more patience than I, I couldn't really get past the beginning so I have to stop, at this point the story just makes me frustrated. That's all.
- Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
She already tall her this in their first meeting. I'll say it again, I hate the flashbacks.
She just smiled at me, "I had to be quick, my presence was harming your world. Additionnaly, there was no need to. When I made you my champion, your mission became a part of your very being. You will intuitively sense your target and will feel the need to kill them. It's a part of you, just as your blood is a part of you. You did not think that my gifts were the only thing I gave you that night, right?" - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
I hate the flashbacks so much. It was already stated that mc was at least impressed by Herpo figuring out some soul magic on his own.
He snarled at me, "You! You're dead, Zeus said so himself. You ruined everything. You killed him before I could finish my apprenticeship with him. I did however learn the secrets of the soul. As you can see, I am immortal." - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
So, right back to being fate's pet
All three of them looked disturbed. "Don't worry, girls," I reassure them, "I have a plan. I can follow the path of the future until the event begins. I will make sure to pave the best path with the better chances of survival of the universe. If everything goes to plan, we should save the universe in half the possible outcomes. But you know what they say, things don't always go according to plan." - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
This makes no sense she already could control her magic in infancy and should remember she has magic
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shouldn't Jon be with the dragons? seems like a bad move to leave them alone in the cripts
Jon Stark and Aryan Stark were in the solar of the castle. Jon Stark was walking around seemingly nervous "Harrold Hardyng wasn't suppose to declare himself King, it wasn't the plan." He continued pacing around. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
how can he be 14 still?
Alysanne is in my arms as Daenerys flies on Raevor from behind. Our daughter has recently turned 9 months old and is as strong as ever. Her eyes are closed as she sleeps. The trip across The Narrow Sea has been an easy one by dragon back. - Peter_Paul_Anka1yrCommented
You are forgetting about decomposition, most of those dead bodies no longer exist. The cold may help preserving them longer but not nearly enough, after a century even the bones turn to dust. That being said this is fiction so whatever, just wanted to put it out there. Nice story so far, this is my third time reading it.
"No, my Lord, it isn't. It would have been better if he attacked today. He will roam the lands north of the wall and will start making wights all over the place. How many person do you think died north of the Wall in these eight thousand years? Even if the Free Folk burned the bodies of their dead they couldn't burn every body. Imagine if juste fifteen hundred people bodies weren't burn each year for eight thousand years. We will have before us a ten million men army including many giants. And it is without taking account of all the creatures that died there too. What about shadowcats, direwolves, bears, ice spiders, mammoths? What if there is bodies of dragons, basilisks, manticores? We must prepare and this is the reason of the summon." - Peter_Paul_Anka2yrReplied to Pixel_Pug
Apparition is a no-no in Hogwarts
Quinn shrugged. He currently had no need for a yacht or plane — he preferred to fly and swim on his own, or even a car with apparition under his belt. - Peter_Paul_Anka2yrReplied to gamabunda4873
that was when he was borned
'It is time to get this implant out of me, then out of my mother.'