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Speckled_ash173 years ago
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I like alternative history stories and this looks good :) Bit of a slow burner at first but it looks like chapter 3+4 things will start to pick up!
Stones of Sumeria
Fantasy · Silhillian
Speckled_ash174 years ago
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What power would I get if I was constipated during the descent?;D
It was fascinating really, the body's response to the injury was to emulate it. It's like developing anti-venom in response to a snake bite. Tailing off down a rabbit hole like a fanatic engrossed in their fantasy, eyes wide with joy and practically frothing at the mouth, the dear doctor listed off his favourite examples. His 'top three' as he branded them were; a girl riddled with shrapnel from an exploding car could now shoot metal projectiles from her body, a man hit by a train could reinforce himself with and release kinetic energy at will, and a woman suffering from motor neurone disease gaining the ability to spontaneously control her muscle growth.
A World Within Reach
Sci-fi · Silhillian
Speckled_ash174 years ago
Commented
Goofy doctor is wise doctor :3
Standing up and moving the sample to a different microscope, the doctor nonchalantly said something rather profound, "Well, not everybody enjoys their work, I'm one of the lucky few I think. Society back then wasn't too dissimilar to now really. People did things they didn't enjoy to survive."
A World Within Reach
Sci-fi · Silhillian
Speckled_ash174 years ago
Posted
Power system is cool! Some good foundations for a decent story. The first chapter should really be more of a prologue though, it is funny though. Maybe could be better pacing. Both dramatic and funny :-3
A World Within Reach
Sci-fi · Silhillian